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Willie Cici
11/22/20, 8:22 PM
Another DW classic in the making. I'd love to see how you continue this story, or even offer an explanation as to who is causing the transformations. Whatever you write, I'll read.
Michael
11/22/20, 8:14 PM
Being a lifelong Catholic boy, I sat reading this all the while wondering when the lightning bolts might start frying my butt. That being said, this story has an amazing start. Very intriguing thus far. I am anxious to see where this story progresses. The host and his minions need to be in full, complete domination mode and wickedly unrelenting. More, please.
11/22/20, 7:49 PM
Hot story. I can't wait to see more.
11/22/20, 7:46 PM
Sounds interesting. Hope Jacob takes over the other guys at the school so he can have a harem of hypnotized good boys. I also hope Jacob tops, let the boys know the power of his cock.
11/22/20, 7:30 PM
would love to see this jock turned slave
11/22/20, 6:41 PM
Love your preppy transformation stories! thanks for posting another great one!
Nov 14, 2020
anon
11/22/20, 3:03 PM
hey, this is the author, checking in: thank you all for your comments! special thanks to hypnothrill especially, for taking the time to write such thoughtful feedback. i consider myself to be an amateur at writing, so i chose to forgo characterization completely in favor of writing a passable induction scene for my first story, thus this "blank slate" character is my fault entirely, haha. i hope to do better in the next, cheers!
Anonymous
11/22/20, 1:53 PM
matt said trans rights
Nov 14, 2020
11/22/20, 1:35 PM
Martin, you make a good point about how the story enables the reader to imagine himself in the place of the main character (who is, as I've said, essentially a blank slate). This is one of the few stories on here that would probably work even better in the 2nd person.
11/22/20, 12:21 PM
I think the story is really hot, especially when Billy and Jared are having strange dreams and finding mysterious photos on their phones. However, the one thing that took me out of the story a little bit was the way you wrote William's "preppy" dialogue; it sounds old-fashioned, overly formal, and prissy. It's such a desexualized voice that I found it out-of-character when William suddenly took out his hard dick and started face-fucking his former friend.