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11/22/20, 6:41 PM
Love your preppy transformation stories! thanks for posting another great one!
Nov 14, 2020
anon
11/22/20, 3:03 PM
hey, this is the author, checking in: thank you all for your comments! special thanks to hypnothrill especially, for taking the time to write such thoughtful feedback. i consider myself to be an amateur at writing, so i chose to forgo characterization completely in favor of writing a passable induction scene for my first story, thus this "blank slate" character is my fault entirely, haha. i hope to do better in the next, cheers!
Anonymous
11/22/20, 1:53 PM
matt said trans rights
Nov 14, 2020
11/22/20, 1:35 PM
Martin, you make a good point about how the story enables the reader to imagine himself in the place of the main character (who is, as I've said, essentially a blank slate). This is one of the few stories on here that would probably work even better in the 2nd person.
11/22/20, 12:21 PM
I think the story is really hot, especially when Billy and Jared are having strange dreams and finding mysterious photos on their phones. However, the one thing that took me out of the story a little bit was the way you wrote William's "preppy" dialogue; it sounds old-fashioned, overly formal, and prissy. It's such a desexualized voice that I found it out-of-character when William suddenly took out his hard dick and started face-fucking his former friend.
Nov 14, 2020
Martin
11/22/20, 12:07 PM
I love hot mind warping stories! Slow and intense, making you crave to be in place of the guy yourself! Please continue!!
Anonymous
11/22/20, 10:20 AM
Glad I found this again! It is as hot as I remembered !!
Nov 14, 2020
boi98229
11/22/20, 9:30 AM
Comments by Hypnothrill and others are right on. My biggest problem with the story is that it only happened in my mind as i was distracted by the need to read. i want to try the real thing! So hot! Thanks so much. Looking forward to more.
11/22/20, 9:22 AM
very hot complete with forced preppification
11/22/20, 9:05 AM
Damn! Makes me want to be a good boy 🤤