Recent Comments

Nov 14, 2020
11/22/20, 1:35 PM
Martin, you make a good point about how the story enables the reader to imagine himself in the place of the main character (who is, as I've said, essentially a blank slate). This is one of the few stories on here that would probably work even better in the 2nd person.
11/22/20, 12:21 PM
I think the story is really hot, especially when Billy and Jared are having strange dreams and finding mysterious photos on their phones. However, the one thing that took me out of the story a little bit was the way you wrote William's "preppy" dialogue; it sounds old-fashioned, overly formal, and prissy. It's such a desexualized voice that I found it out-of-character when William suddenly took out his hard dick and started face-fucking his former friend.
Nov 14, 2020
Martin
11/22/20, 12:07 PM
I love hot mind warping stories! Slow and intense, making you crave to be in place of the guy yourself! Please continue!!
Anonymous
11/22/20, 10:20 AM
Glad I found this again! It is as hot as I remembered !!
Nov 14, 2020
boi98229
11/22/20, 9:30 AM
Comments by Hypnothrill and others are right on. My biggest problem with the story is that it only happened in my mind as i was distracted by the need to read. i want to try the real thing! So hot! Thanks so much. Looking forward to more.
11/22/20, 9:22 AM
very hot complete with forced preppification
11/22/20, 9:05 AM
Damn! Makes me want to be a good boy 🤤
Lee
11/22/20, 8:03 AM
ABO literature? ? ?
11/22/20, 5:31 AM
I'm glad you like this series, but I can't really take much credit for it. The first two "Jockey" stories ("Jockey Destinies" and "Jockey Inevitability") were all-male adaptations of lesbian pantyhose stories that William Lee posted on MCStories back in the late 1990s, and they made only minimal changes to the original stories. I came back to the series with "Jockey Embrace," but that was also an adaptation of a story that Shado posted to MCStories. Although "Jockey Expansion" used some of the same characters that were in "Jockey Embrace," that one actually was completely my own work. And the most recent trilogy ("Jockey Infestation", "Jockey Annihilation", and "Jockey Harvest") were by a completely different author; all I did was offer was offer a bit of editing feedback. The author of this most recent trilogy didn't want to post under his own name, because he was worried that he'd get indignant comments about a different series he'd left unfinished. This writer--who I wish I could name, but he swore me to secrecy--is much better at visual descriptions than I am. So I wish I could take credit for that aspect of the story, but I cannot! Very glad you enjoyed these stories,though. And if you did, you might want to check out some of my other underwear conversion stories (like "Influencer") that are entirely my own work.
11/22/20, 5:30 AM
A great read. I hope there is more!