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11/22/20, 2:41 AM
Nice work, would love to see what other revealing gifts are in those Pumper bags for the others!
11/22/20, 1:34 AM
Will seems confident, but not arrogant. Given his character up until now, it doesn't seem like he would try to forcefully keep the power after the seventh day. If anything, he would give it up, making sure he was satisfied by the seventh day, or try to find some peaceful workaround while keeping in mind possible consequences. It would be odd and very out of character if he suddenly became greedy or power hungry at this point.
11/22/20, 1:26 AM
Thank you for your kind words. I'm not a professional writer & have had great difficulty in formating this story. I also suffer from a mild form of Dyslexia, which makes writing [even on a computer] harder than normal..Everything gets switched around between eye contact & finger contact. The editor of this site, Martin was very kind in reformatting some of my first chapter, [but I know I can't count on his continued help]...In the meantime, thank you again, Hypnoguy 67. Your comment meant the world to me & is the reason I've attempted a part 2...If this site accepts it and more folks express an interest, I could envision going at least 9 or 10 chapters....The ideas keep flowing, but the execution is very difficult.
11/22/20, 12:13 AM
Hot! I love a good preppification story!
dannylyndin
11/21/20, 11:37 PM
more please
11/21/20, 11:29 PM
One of my favorite writers ever is back! Yay!
Anonymous
11/21/20, 8:23 PM
such a sweet ending
Emale.rick@gmail
11/21/20, 5:49 PM
Hot wish i had that body in leather, body swapping that is!! **** Where can i sign up.
11/21/20, 5:25 PM
Great story. Can't wait for the next 20 chapters!!!
11/21/20, 4:31 PM
This is exactly my type of story. I love a good spoken word becomes truth story, and the fact that he’s slowly getting his full power allowed you to throw in some nice tension. I’m excited to read more.