Recent Comments

11/21/20, 5:25 PM
Great story. Can't wait for the next 20 chapters!!!
11/21/20, 4:31 PM
This is exactly my type of story. I love a good spoken word becomes truth story, and the fact that he’s slowly getting his full power allowed you to throw in some nice tension. I’m excited to read more.
11/21/20, 4:07 PM
Great beginning! I look forward to what happens next.
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11/21/20, 3:06 PM
Wow! How hot would it be to have such a cute, but full-grown, naked baby boy with a permanently hard cock around? Needing to satisfy a man's sexual needs! How hot would it be to be that baby boy?!!
11/21/20, 2:46 PM
Thank you for your comment's. I wish I had an Editor who could go over my story & correct its errors in spelling, grammar, etc before it's printed...When I reread my own story, I was also horrified at it myself !! Sorry it's so unprofessional !
11/21/20, 12:57 PM
> it seems as though the actors have taken their places for the grand finale. So, quiet on the set! Lights! Camera! ACTION. > A war is cumming...
11/21/20, 11:11 AM
A very enjoyable read, Ethan! Thanks for writing this awesome series.
Martin
11/21/20, 8:05 AM
I'm really intrigued where this is heading to, the beginning hints at some promising ideas. So please continue to share your fantasy with us. However, you really should take some time and work on your spelling and grammar. And the formatting. I took the time to fix the formatting for you. I don't know how and where you wrote your text on, but your line and paragraph breaks weren't properly recognized at all. If you need some tips how to write a text (on your smart phone or wherever you're writing) and how to let the computer help you to correct your spelling and grammar, we'd be happy to help. Just start a thread in the forum!
11/21/20, 7:01 AM
Ah, well, I'm not sure how much of that I can answer, really, as this story is tied into the greater overarching mythos of Hierarch Industries. I'm trying not to be too explicit with the exposition in these stories as regards that mythos but I like to leave little clues that link them all together. For this one I'd suggest taking a look at the blurb of the first chapter and going back to read my Camp Sherwood story if you're up for a bit of a scavenger hunt. All I'll say is that this story is linked to Project: Ophiuchus.
11/21/20, 6:39 AM
Yes yes hello, I'd like to order a large Hawaiian pizza with light cheese and a side of Shawn please. Thank you.