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11/21/20, 2:46 PM
Thank you for your comment's. I wish I had an Editor who could go over my story & correct its errors in spelling, grammar, etc before it's printed...When I reread my own story, I was also horrified at it myself !! Sorry it's so unprofessional !
11/21/20, 12:57 PM
> it seems as though the actors have taken their places for the grand finale. So, quiet on the set! Lights! Camera! ACTION. > A war is cumming...
11/21/20, 11:11 AM
A very enjoyable read, Ethan! Thanks for writing this awesome series.
Martin
11/21/20, 8:05 AM
I'm really intrigued where this is heading to, the beginning hints at some promising ideas. So please continue to share your fantasy with us. However, you really should take some time and work on your spelling and grammar. And the formatting. I took the time to fix the formatting for you. I don't know how and where you wrote your text on, but your line and paragraph breaks weren't properly recognized at all. If you need some tips how to write a text (on your smart phone or wherever you're writing) and how to let the computer help you to correct your spelling and grammar, we'd be happy to help. Just start a thread in the forum!
11/21/20, 7:01 AM
Ah, well, I'm not sure how much of that I can answer, really, as this story is tied into the greater overarching mythos of Hierarch Industries. I'm trying not to be too explicit with the exposition in these stories as regards that mythos but I like to leave little clues that link them all together. For this one I'd suggest taking a look at the blurb of the first chapter and going back to read my Camp Sherwood story if you're up for a bit of a scavenger hunt. All I'll say is that this story is linked to Project: Ophiuchus.
11/21/20, 6:39 AM
Yes yes hello, I'd like to order a large Hawaiian pizza with light cheese and a side of Shawn please. Thank you.
Anonymous
11/21/20, 5:43 AM
wonderful series, the ending fully lived up to the promise of the beginning. your characters have a life to them and your writing style is excellent. definite thumbs up the whole way. although, i still feel like there are loose ends that intrigue me. even if you dont write a story about them, what happened with mac? who was their boss? were they hypnotized/inducted as well? and how did robin's plan begin? how much of tyler's growth was under his own steam? was it just a personal evolution that was kickstarted by mind alteration, or is this tyler truly distinct from the tyler before, if that makes sense? does he ever repair his relationship with his coach? why has robin chose to wield the power he does? how common is a situation like the one we've seen? did he reciprocate tyler's feelings from the start, or was it just attraction? i'm so curious!!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
11/21/20, 5:19 AM
I would pay to be permanently made this way.
11/21/20, 4:25 AM
Very hot transformations. I'd love to see the story continue.
11/21/20, 3:32 AM
If you liked this, check out my [twitter!](https://twitter.com/AlokhTorgud) My boyfriend [(@AstrumEroticum)](https://twitter.com/AstrumEroticum) also often does artwork of our characters, and you can find smaller drabbles I've done in the past! As well as fics that don't fit within the purview of GSS here, haha