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11/20/20, 5:18 PM
> I assumed you were calling back to Vive le Québec libre! > Oui.
11/20/20, 5:13 PM
> I agonized over this line. I was afraid it was too funny for the moment. I’m glad you saw it as I intended it. It didn't strike me as too funny. I assumed you were calling back to Vive le Québec libre!
11/20/20, 5:10 PM
You bastard. I was cheering for Rugby Boy to crush the plant with his new muscle until the last moment.
11/20/20, 5:10 PM
I thought it was poignant. It got a small, sad smile out of me- right before I went back to jerking off. I think it's a perfect microcosm of humanity's situation: we might go kicking and screaming, but in the end, we're all going to slip our dicks in plants. It remains to be seen how long Rugby Boy stays full of piss and vinegar- I have a feeling the Deputy can change that right quick. And as I suspected, everything comes down to Rugby Boy and Snake...
11/20/20, 4:56 PM
> his cry of “Long live humanity!” as the Symbiont entered him was a perfect act of defiance. > I agonized over this line. I was afraid it was too funny for the moment. I'm glad you saw it as I intended it.
11/20/20, 4:47 PM
What a chapter! I love that Rugby Boy went down fighting--his cry of "Long live humanity!" as the Symbiont entered him was a perfect act of defiance. Plus the fact that he didn't immediately fall under the Great One's thrall is intriguing, as is the fact that the Deputy Great One seems directly opposed to the Kansas Great One...it seems as though the actors have taken their places for the grand finale. So, quiet on the set! Lights! Camera! ACTION.
11/20/20, 4:23 PM
You monster. That was great. My dick instantly started leaking the instant you described the plant in the room. Part of me was hoping that Rugby Boy might manage to get out of it, that a last-minute declaration of love would save the day. But realistically, there was no way he was going to be able to resist Snake's psychic control, or that Snake was going to be able to disobey a direct command from the Deputy. My heart was thumping in my chest as you described Rugby Boy slip his dick into the flower. Since starting to write this comment, I've already blown two loads over that scene. Amazing stuff, Absman. Naturally, Rugby Boy feels betrayed. And I think he has every right to be, especially given how much Snake promised to protect him from the plants. And now Rugby Boy is going to confront the Deputy and Lane. One final moment of peril for Rugby Boy. Will the Deputy use his powers to bring Rugby Boy under his thrall? Will he command Lane or Snake to dispose of a rebellious Host? If either one of those, will Snake find it within himself to rebel and save Rugby Boy, the two of them fugitives from both Great Ones? One more chapter... Oh, and that was certainly *not* the confession I was expecting from Rugby Boy, lol.
11/20/20, 3:36 PM
If they could be turned into heavy musclemen AND leather addicted it would be heaven ! Think about it ;)
11/20/20, 3:28 PM
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Rock Creek Werewolf
11/20/20, 11:48 AM
a creative & enjoyable read. i applaud your playfulness. hope you expand upon it, like how will the musclemen seek to overcome their affliction & still grow food, ensure shelter for themselves once the last Zack, Zeke, & Zed is affected? its always interesting to read from the perspective of a muscleman who likes their new status, but also needs to navigate their way through the world.