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11/20/20, 4:47 PM
What a chapter! I love that Rugby Boy went down fighting--his cry of "Long live humanity!" as the Symbiont entered him was a perfect act of defiance. Plus the fact that he didn't immediately fall under the Great One's thrall is intriguing, as is the fact that the Deputy Great One seems directly opposed to the Kansas Great One...it seems as though the actors have taken their places for the grand finale. So, quiet on the set! Lights! Camera! ACTION.
11/20/20, 4:23 PM
You monster. That was great. My dick instantly started leaking the instant you described the plant in the room. Part of me was hoping that Rugby Boy might manage to get out of it, that a last-minute declaration of love would save the day. But realistically, there was no way he was going to be able to resist Snake's psychic control, or that Snake was going to be able to disobey a direct command from the Deputy. My heart was thumping in my chest as you described Rugby Boy slip his dick into the flower. Since starting to write this comment, I've already blown two loads over that scene. Amazing stuff, Absman. Naturally, Rugby Boy feels betrayed. And I think he has every right to be, especially given how much Snake promised to protect him from the plants. And now Rugby Boy is going to confront the Deputy and Lane. One final moment of peril for Rugby Boy. Will the Deputy use his powers to bring Rugby Boy under his thrall? Will he command Lane or Snake to dispose of a rebellious Host? If either one of those, will Snake find it within himself to rebel and save Rugby Boy, the two of them fugitives from both Great Ones? One more chapter... Oh, and that was certainly *not* the confession I was expecting from Rugby Boy, lol.
11/20/20, 3:36 PM
If they could be turned into heavy musclemen AND leather addicted it would be heaven ! Think about it ;)
11/20/20, 3:28 PM
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Rock Creek Werewolf
11/20/20, 11:48 AM
a creative & enjoyable read. i applaud your playfulness. hope you expand upon it, like how will the musclemen seek to overcome their affliction & still grow food, ensure shelter for themselves once the last Zack, Zeke, & Zed is affected? its always interesting to read from the perspective of a muscleman who likes their new status, but also needs to navigate their way through the world.
11/20/20, 8:51 AM
I'm starting to wonder if we're ever going to find out what is happening in the background... the romance part is cute and lovely but what was the mechanism Robin used? Is he controlling Mac too? Coach as well? Certainly it looked like the Dean was under his thumb... Wealth is one thing but since he's teaching when he doesn't need the money, what is Robin's motivation? Does he have genuine feelings for the star athlete and he went to great lengths to "convert" him to his standards? Or is he proving to somebody - or himself - that he is able to subjugate a whole university? Or is it even a revenge ploy where Tyler did something in the past to someone close to Robin and now his reckoning is fast approaching? SO MANY possibilities...!
boi98229
11/20/20, 7:48 AM
Great story! i love the sense of Dominance and submission, but also they way you described the shift in power and control, and the process of seduction and Jake's slow realization of his own submission and transformation. So *hot!* Thanks so much!
boi98229
11/20/20, 6:52 AM
I agree with most of the comments above - very creative and original in my experience as well. This sort of almost complete transformation into a real object is not typically the kind of erotic reading I look for - typically would seem too transformative and too permanent a change for me. Still, Scotty was so completely enamored with Roger. Scotty was still there in spirit in the end, and even as he realized he was disappearing, he was still ready to submit and serve Roger so completely. It seemed like Scotty might be just fine with this ending. It did disturb me, but who I am to say when Scotty is okay with it?! Thanks for bending my mind!
May 26, 2020
11/20/20, 6:52 AM
absolutely gorgeous on every level. one of the best stories on this site, and one i think i'll definitely be rereading. frankly i would read a whole novel-length version of this
boi98229
11/20/20, 6:10 AM
Hey! Thanks again. I enjoyed this chapter as much this time as the first time I read it. I would still really like to read more! Really, how does the cartel treat their male sex slaves?! I really want to know!