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Anonymous
11/20/20, 11:04 PM
Excellent!
11/20/20, 10:48 PM
Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Tyler's change was wonderful to read about and everything wrapped up smoothly. A very nice piece of writing.
11/20/20, 10:46 PM
were just Chris and Levi affected or Adam and Lucas were turned as well?
11/20/20, 10:22 PM
Humping the inflatable was strangely hot. Well done.
11/20/20, 9:56 PM
Really well-written mental regression, but I'm having trouble seeing where the story goes from here. From the summary, it sounds like Liam and then perhaps Eric are mentally regressed next, but given how upset they both are by Ben's transformation, I can't understand why they'd go along with Ken's experiment.
11/20/20, 9:54 PM
Love this, can't wait for the next chapter
11/20/20, 9:26 PM
> Standing up to Snake and revealing that he understood all the while and made him work to speak French. > That Rugby Boy was bi-lingual was in my head the whole time but I didn't know when I was gonna pull the trigger. I'm glad this moment happened for the reveal. > And then Devin comes in at the end; so how exactly with the Great One heal him and what will the Great One make him into? > Honestly, I have no idea -- I'm glad Devin got a reward tho.
11/20/20, 9:11 PM
Loved the whole series
11/20/20, 8:52 PM
Another little bit I love, that I neglected to comment on- the "*oui* to "we" line was such a great little touch, I loved the pun. So Devin, Joe, Snake, Rugby Boy, the Sheriff, and the Deputy alone in a room together... and the Super-Soldiers on their way to take out Bowden and maybe Murdock, and hopefully save Tony... one more week to find out how this all ends...
11/20/20, 7:59 PM
Wow, Rugby Boy comes to us as a full character now. Standing up to Snake and revealing that he understood all the while and made him work to speak French. And then Devin comes in at the end; so how exactly with the Great One heal him and what will the Great One make him into?