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Somnus
11/19/20, 3:35 PM
An interesting idea well executed.
AAA
11/19/20, 3:03 PM
"Bob was done before Robert? It seems like you could alter the timing with a (nick)name change." Well now I'm going to be overthinking the targeting mechanics of this for the next while, thanks. :/ :P -- Also, while I get this was a short idea-piece more that something directly pornographic, I have to admit, I've not seen as many 'internal perspective as someone becomes hot muscled sex-focused' stories as I'd like recently (dumber optional), so I admit to some mild disappointment - in terms of my expectations; the execution of what you were aiming for was great.. But if someone were to write a version of this that explores it more fully (accelerated perspective during the transformation so the writer has more subjective time to explore?), that would be really awesome.
11/19/20, 1:18 PM
Great work, Derek! Very creative.
Anonymous
11/19/20, 12:08 PM
Whoa, this was a surprised indeed. I have a few ideas that might be approached. Like Thanos used his snaps to make Clint realize his true love for Pietro, using Pietro to seduce Clint to have him willingly join the Thanos' avengers, or maybe have Pietro escort Clint on what he could have done and made him proud in SHIELD. After his suppoused conversion, Thanos plans to use Clint as a Medium to spy in SHIELD while using their cocktail of mind controlling semen on all men in SHIELD. Even having Tony uses his resources to make all male superheroes submit to Thanos. Whoops, a bit too much there. But hope this helps.
Anonymous
11/19/20, 12:05 PM
Bob was done before Robert? It seems like you could alter the timing with a (nick)name change. A nit: the plural if Aaron is Aarons, not Aaron's. Ditto the other names. "New Years" should be "New Year's" as it owns the implied period of time.
11/19/20, 11:34 AM
That made me very, very happy. Thank you for the laugh and for the clever satire. Brilliant. Well done. Sadly, my name begins with "T" -- unless we go by oennames!!!
11/19/20, 9:50 AM
What a clever, hot story! Great going. :)
Anonymous
11/19/20, 9:44 AM
Awesome
11/19/20, 8:24 AM
Brilliant twist on a familiar motif! I'm guessing that February 20 is the day when all the Dereks get affected, huh?
11/19/20, 8:15 AM
Another great one, man! I always get excited when you have a new story out. A unique idea, and I like how you explore some of the societal ramifications.