Recent Comments

11/18/20, 8:46 PM
This sort of story isn't usually my thing. However, I am glad I read it as there was some unexpected aspects that made it well worth while for me in ways I didn't know would do so. I would have liked a little more detail in the changes happening, particularly the mental shift from person to briefs. I do particularly like how he managed to still try to give the guy a blowjob as briefs. Alluded to a sort of awareness on some level. Over all it was a fantastic read.
11/18/20, 7:43 PM
I'm just a softie and I was touched by the declaration
11/18/20, 7:28 PM
loved it!
easdf
11/18/20, 5:49 PM
Oh the irony in this story is fantastic! I really really liked the mind-fuck aspect of the story and hope to see it more again! Now it may be just a matter of taste, but in the previous episodes when you called the ass pussy and the dick slit it drove me wild with horniness so i would very much like more of that too. All in all, an amazing job!
easdf
11/18/20, 5:15 PM
I just saw you thought this story is as good as the others. You are extremely wrong. This was the hottest and funniest story I've read in a long time here on this site
11/18/20, 5:06 PM
@anon#1 : I do have something against homophobic people in general! Big meathead jocks, however, are only a stereotype I love writing about! :-D @Feed Your Head : I just love to exploit how a single word like "sting" or "split" can have different meanings, whether they are used literally or figuratively. "Stung" here is a reference to how hurt someone can get from words, but could also reference to the venom making its way into the body through a physical wound - a stinging pain. :-) @darkblade2814 : I dunno, dude. That would be really cliché, wouldn't it? :-P @Heru Kane : I thought that was apparent since the first transformation with Asher, but I guess people could have misinterpreted it. :-) @Deej : He sure did... or at least it seems so? Theo getting super sus, huh? ;-) @Honeyflower : Theo sus, huh? But wait! Is "red herring" a plot point in the poem? Writer sus. :-O
easdf
11/18/20, 5:00 PM
I admit I wasn't sure how to feel about this premise given it's closeness to reality mixed with non-consent sex, but it was really hot and more than that, the twist in the end was so fucking great it even dealt with this subject by itself. Very well done (though please do some big top small sub too for us normees)
Maxigay
11/18/20, 4:53 PM
Ng5hvlo4. My friend, thank you for answering me, I am a faithful follower of your stories and as such they are collected in my personal library, the topic of drones fascinates me ...
11/18/20, 3:49 PM
Theo is very suspicious but I am not sure if he is the red herring.
Ng5hvlo4
11/18/20, 3:32 PM
Not at all. I definitely need to write a chapter that gives the reader the behind-the-scenes (Chapter 5) of why the change happened, from drones serving humans to humans becoming drones. This story is a big work that is going to take some time to get fully set up (over 3 series, which I write as the inspiration strikes), and it is comments like these that are what inspire the writing! Thank you. To those who gave comments in the first version of this story, don't worry I still have a local copy of those comments so that I can address those in Chapter 5 of this series.