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11/18/20, 11:34 PM
Some very deep thinking in this episode! Can't wait to see what Larry becomes. Will he forgive his brother or turn him into a beast? Stay Tuned!
11/18/20, 10:58 PM
Another great chapter. I really wanna see what happens next, but it's been 2 years since you last updated this story. So unless you prove me wrong, this is where it ends..?
11/18/20, 10:36 PM
Please continue! So far this is one of my favorites of all time :D
11/18/20, 10:23 PM
This is great start. I'm looking forward to Part 2.
11/18/20, 8:46 PM
This sort of story isn't usually my thing. However, I am glad I read it as there was some unexpected aspects that made it well worth while for me in ways I didn't know would do so. I would have liked a little more detail in the changes happening, particularly the mental shift from person to briefs. I do particularly like how he managed to still try to give the guy a blowjob as briefs. Alluded to a sort of awareness on some level. Over all it was a fantastic read.
11/18/20, 7:43 PM
I'm just a softie and I was touched by the declaration
11/18/20, 7:28 PM
loved it!
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11/18/20, 5:49 PM
Oh the irony in this story is fantastic! I really really liked the mind-fuck aspect of the story and hope to see it more again! Now it may be just a matter of taste, but in the previous episodes when you called the ass pussy and the dick slit it drove me wild with horniness so i would very much like more of that too. All in all, an amazing job!
easdf
11/18/20, 5:15 PM
I just saw you thought this story is as good as the others. You are extremely wrong. This was the hottest and funniest story I've read in a long time here on this site
11/18/20, 5:06 PM
@anon#1 : I do have something against homophobic people in general! Big meathead jocks, however, are only a stereotype I love writing about! :-D @Feed Your Head : I just love to exploit how a single word like "sting" or "split" can have different meanings, whether they are used literally or figuratively. "Stung" here is a reference to how hurt someone can get from words, but could also reference to the venom making its way into the body through a physical wound - a stinging pain. :-) @darkblade2814 : I dunno, dude. That would be really cliché, wouldn't it? :-P @Heru Kane : I thought that was apparent since the first transformation with Asher, but I guess people could have misinterpreted it. :-) @Deej : He sure did... or at least it seems so? Theo getting super sus, huh? ;-) @Honeyflower : Theo sus, huh? But wait! Is "red herring" a plot point in the poem? Writer sus. :-O