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11/18/20, 5:06 PM
@anon#1 : I do have something against homophobic people in general! Big meathead jocks, however, are only a stereotype I love writing about! :-D @Feed Your Head : I just love to exploit how a single word like "sting" or "split" can have different meanings, whether they are used literally or figuratively. "Stung" here is a reference to how hurt someone can get from words, but could also reference to the venom making its way into the body through a physical wound - a stinging pain. :-) @darkblade2814 : I dunno, dude. That would be really cliché, wouldn't it? :-P @Heru Kane : I thought that was apparent since the first transformation with Asher, but I guess people could have misinterpreted it. :-) @Deej : He sure did... or at least it seems so? Theo getting super sus, huh? ;-) @Honeyflower : Theo sus, huh? But wait! Is "red herring" a plot point in the poem? Writer sus. :-O
easdf
11/18/20, 5:00 PM
I admit I wasn't sure how to feel about this premise given it's closeness to reality mixed with non-consent sex, but it was really hot and more than that, the twist in the end was so fucking great it even dealt with this subject by itself. Very well done (though please do some big top small sub too for us normees)
Maxigay
11/18/20, 4:53 PM
Ng5hvlo4. My friend, thank you for answering me, I am a faithful follower of your stories and as such they are collected in my personal library, the topic of drones fascinates me ...
11/18/20, 3:49 PM
Theo is very suspicious but I am not sure if he is the red herring.
Ng5hvlo4
11/18/20, 3:32 PM
Not at all. I definitely need to write a chapter that gives the reader the behind-the-scenes (Chapter 5) of why the change happened, from drones serving humans to humans becoming drones. This story is a big work that is going to take some time to get fully set up (over 3 series, which I write as the inspiration strikes), and it is comments like these that are what inspire the writing! Thank you. To those who gave comments in the first version of this story, don't worry I still have a local copy of those comments so that I can address those in Chapter 5 of this series.
11/18/20, 3:24 PM
totally and willingly dig this series with every fiber of my throbbing stud cock
11/18/20, 2:41 PM
> do you have the next part planned yet? Not quite. The actual reunion between Hawkeye and Quicksilver is proving to be a bitch to write and even plan. Any ideas for that are more than welcome! On the other hand I have several chapters to add retrospectively that i hope people will like.
11/18/20, 2:28 PM
I think that would indeed be more of a "one-off-what-if" chapters. A non-canonical adventure into a realm of possibility. What is more interesting, is that in his short time interacting with Dennis, Jese is already quite the cock slut... Colin however, has known Dennis quite a long time? "Hey, want to try a game?" "In that Mindgear? I tried my brother's quickly when he bought it." "Awesome. I've got a cool game you'll like." *Sips beer* "Okay"
Maxigay
11/18/20, 2:16 PM
Excellent, morbid and hot as always, but as in my previous comment in another story that joins, I lose the link since everything becomes a drone and the human interaction is lost, Master and drones at your service and why not a twist where the drone with some fault becomes the Master of the human. I feel that everything comes to a vicious cycle of sex between them. I hope I don't bother you with my comment, thanks for reading.
11/18/20, 1:57 PM
This is an intriguing idea! Although the story has so far not been erotic at all (masses of anonymous bodies and the term "manhandled" do not connote temptation), I am sure the best is yet to come. After all, since this is a religious figure I would think temptation would naturally come from some wayward teens, or at least someone with a developed and corrupting personality, but I look forward to Chapter 3!