Very nice. Each chapter has given us a little more and upped the ante in a good way! Keep it up!

@Dioscuri He might? Emphasis on "?" I suppose there are 3 main routes here. He never finds out, but that would be boring. He finds out, but sits back and watches. He finds out, but knowing A, the power of hypnosis, and B, jealousy, he interveens. How would he interveen? I have some ideas. I have to just write through the game and see what openings present themselves.

Wow ! Chapter 3 took turns I didn't expect...I definitely didn't expect the boy's father to react quite how he did...His 'new' memories seemed a little extreme for my tastes, but you are the author & I realize it's your story to write as you wish!...I personally would have enjoyed a little more subtlety in the Dad's 'new' past memories of his interactions with his two son's,,,It seems the sexual aspects [incest] of their relationship was [extreme]....a little overdone for my taste....But, you are a very good writer and I would have loved you to stretch out the Father/Sons past memories, featuring a little bit more father/brother HUMILIATION toward Tommy & more idol-worship toward [now] athletic,Manly Ethan, dealing with 'Sport's' & 'Bullying' as well as more feelings of intense inferiority by Tommy. As you can tell, I'm a big fan of stories dealing with the implanting of false PAST MEMORIES, affecting 'new' CURRENT BEHAVIORS . Hope we get into more of Tommy's now remembered juvenile behaviors & actions [as well as others reactions to it], before we jump-into the more intense sex scenes...Now that he thinks of himself as a fellow weak, little nerd, like the ' little boy's' he's been instructed to 'service', it would be interesting to see his new mindset [& these 'Nerds' should be portrayed as the most undesirable little weaklings on campus !] .. When word gets out that Tommy is behaving like a Faggot, will these nerds decide to finally take their understandable long held feelings of frustration & aggression out on him, becoming bully's like those bros who had always bullied them in the past ?? I also hope Tommy's Teddy Bear arrives soon so he can confess his boyish feelings to it while he's in bed sucking his thumb..Perhaps he'll sleep so soundly with Teddy, that he will start wetting his bed while asleep realizing that he's always needed a diaper when he sleeps. Also if he gets the least bit excited during the day, he still can't control his bladder, causing him a great deal of embarrassment at school!...Thank you again for indulging my ramblings .......

Ah, I think I follow, now. I'm going to need Google Translate open in another tab while I read Chapter 20!

> While I wait for Friday, I’m mulling over what I could write to torture you the most. > That's Author Love, man. Thank you. Please torture me with some of your crazy hot stories -- good luck! Signed -- a fan.

> Regardless, I’m waiting to see how exactly RB is going to “come out on top” over Vernon. > I think you need to read my comment again -- you're misreading it. In referring to derogatory references about French-speakers, I said, "On this note, Rugby Boy gets the last laugh." Bwah-ha-ha-ha-ha!

> put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! And then there's freaks like me who were reaching for the lube...

> Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody’s Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out! Don't worry. While I wait for Friday, I'm mulling over what I could write to torture you the most.

> Okay, after the last chapter I was pissed at you about Rugby Boy, but good feint. > Cruel Author Fun: put Everybody's Favorite Character in jeopardy and watch people freak the fuck out!

This story was certainly different, in a good way. The ending was definitely a twist, and I respect how creative it was. I love the sweat/ musk elements in here and it was so hot how powerless Scotty on the onset. A total pleasure to read and very hot!