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11/16/20, 9:46 PM
I'm leaning towards 2. 3 is an interesting idea, but I think the evidence is firmly on the side of Snake's preexisting dominance over RB getting enhanced by the symbiont. Keep reading.
11/16/20, 9:39 PM
Yeah, I see three possibilities: (1) French has formal and informal 'you', which is weird to an anglo so Absman420 didn't differentiate. (2) He's deliberately showing that Snake has meh French. (3) Rugby Boy is somehow in power over Snake, but Absman420 is letting us know that.
11/16/20, 9:20 PM
I'm willing to bet it's a mixture of Google Translate, and Absman wanting Snake to speak non-fluent French that *translates* properly, but may not be grammatically correct Snake seems the kind of guy who may not know (or care) about the grammar rules of a Romance language, especially if the only guy he's speaking it to is a hot rugby player head-over-heels for him.
11/16/20, 8:39 PM
I hope Will can make physical changes to guys as well as mental. Please continue!
Elm
11/16/20, 7:53 PM
Now this is a great story! cant wait to see more of Butler Dad! haha
11/16/20, 7:26 PM
I'm so happy that this story is back. Can't wait for the dog hood and harness kit transformation Chuck will no doubt go through--he's gotta to dress for the job he wants >:)
11/16/20, 5:51 PM
I want to thank the couple of you who commented on this, reminding me that there were people interested in this story. It's one of my lesser read stories, but I've been really wanting to continue. I'm glad I did. There's a lot of interesting directions I might go from here.
11/16/20, 5:14 PM
Thank you for considering [& using] some of my suggestions.....You crammed an awful lot of stuff into this chapter...KEEP-UP THE GOOD WORK !
Anonymous
11/16/20, 4:51 PM
Excellent ! One chapter left only, hope it's juicy erotic.
11/16/20, 3:52 PM
@Feed Your Head : Being 'split' in half by a giant Latino wearing lumberjack stuff seems to fit the verse! Theo sus, huh? Would he harm Jen in the next chapter, though? ;-) @anon#3 : Larry sus, huh? ;-)