Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/17/20, 2:46 AM
I LOVE the build up. It hits VERY CLOSE to home as I am a professor as well. VERY WELL WRITTEN and I love the gradual changes in Tyler. Somehow I find myself rooting for him now. 😊 I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/17/20, 2:40 AM
Not bad, I hope we can see more of the dad too, like, why does he has to stay away? He needs his butler on the house where he lives lol
Evan
11/17/20, 2:18 AM
Fantastic! Neat premise and perfect execution.
Nov 13, 2020
Evan
11/17/20, 12:49 AM
Dumbing down is a real turn on for me. But I agree. It's a testament to your writing that I loved Aaron so much, and their friendship was so nice, that I felt really bad his buddy betrayed him.
11/17/20, 12:43 AM
Hi! This is an amazing series. Can't wait to see if anything else happens between Derek & Daniel. I'll keep reading...
Nov 14, 2020
Evan
11/17/20, 12:35 AM
Tremendous! Very well done. Definitely made me feel good. Hypnothrill's advice is excellent too. I loved this story and a little extra depth of what he's losing would take it even higher. Can't wait to see your other story. Thanks for writing.
Nov 14, 2020
11/17/20, 12:10 AM
By god is this well written. I love how semi erratic the guy's line of thinking was and how he gradually changed. While instant changes are fun and all, the gradual transformation was the real kicker.
11/17/20, 12:04 AM
> And another superhero reference. > Hahaha -- have we met?
11/16/20, 11:30 PM
My palms were seriously sweaty for Devin when he was being carried up the stairs spiderman style. And another superhero reference.
11/16/20, 11:07 PM
I'm liking that the elder Lenoldi is just starting to understand that he's not the one in control here. Arrogance is one hell of a drug. Reminds me of the porn studio owner in "Erotically Enhanced Executives" from my Vanilla series - the guy who thinks he's in control right up until the moment he realizes he'll never be in control again. Laughed out loud at Tully trying to remember how to record her call. I've done that one myself. Yeah... I'm definitely in love with Rugby Boy. Please don't hurt him. You can hurt Sheriff Lane.