Very hot!

Hot!

wow! super hot story!

UwU Hawt.

awesome how Will is enjoying his powers. can wait to see him try it on other guys ;)

HOT!!!!

@Elmara Thank you thank you! Yeah, the pace is furious, and I think it is because I love the Mindgear idea. I mean, I hope I get to live to a point where we can play something similar to it, but the erotic aspect of it is arousing to me. I'm already working at the next chapter, but I'm just taking it a little slower since I just need to kink out the motivations of the game. But otherwise, yeah, really having fun with the Mindgear. I am rushing it a little, because I feel like I have so much content I want to explore. Also, its tough for me to get lots of time to focus on writing, which is why I just type and print. Don't really have time to review. And since I usually have so many things going on when I'm writing I think I slip up a bunch. But in terms of slutty stuff, the next game will definitely be pushing more boundaries. There is no secrecy to dance around, and although Jese wouldn't be surprised if Charlie pulls out a gay game (which Jese would enjoy anyways), he isn't sure if it will be something sexual, and/or how sexual it would be. That being said, it will be sexual, and this time sex and hypnosis will be the hard focus. I can definitely slut it up more than usual given the concept of the game. But while I usually have my closet kinks, like speedos and stuff, the next game definitely opens up Jese to some things. Let's just say, the game will require strategy. Playing it casual won't make things any easier. @nycBoot If you ever want to chat, here is fine, or even email. Always willing to talk stories and hypno. But concerning that question. I think the disadvantage Jese has is that a, the stuff happening is overwheling, and B, he is usually charmed to some extent while it is happening. So when the random NPC's are saying it, Jese probably isn't recognizing it as much since he is under a type of trance. He probably also tries to actively block it out. By the time Dennis starts calling him a slut, I'd factor two things into his reaction. A, there is a lot going on and "that is what those NPC's keep tetling me" is at the bottom of his things to address list. B, he has been under and turned into a cock slut enough times that once Dennis' starts using it on him, Jese is subconsciously very happy to hear it. So yeah, a little bit of him having too much stimulus for him to connect the dots, but its dots that are faded and difficult to recall. But yes, Dennis programs his NPC's to a certain extent, but the AI help give his mods a lot more content. The idea would be, that Dennis knows about hypnotic techniques. He incorporates that into what his NPC's say and do. Specifically, he might have core triggers he might want to place into the game so that Jese hears that alot, associates it to pleasure and good times, so that when he says it a positive aura follows.

I wonder what is he going to do to the angry professor, maybe he will have a slight change of attitude? or even careers? cant wait!

amazing stuff!! I think it'd be hot to have some transformations where they stay concious, like a guy turned bottom and hates it, but it just feels too good. or a guy who gets the power to control when a guy can cum, making them want to so bad they'll do anything for release

That was an awesome story. you described the mind control really good. I'm also a big fan of the big smiles on the guys. would love to see Brailin fall under the bards spell, maybe a prequel?