Recent Comments

Lusty Stallion
11/15/20, 10:37 PM
Don't worry darkblade. I've got your fantasy in my sites. midnight cant be far off so the nights winding up however we can tweak the policeman and help others join his cause at the station.
11/15/20, 10:20 PM
> If this is the way the world ends, I’ll line up at the nearest greenhouse. > Lust + Muscle Growth = Easy End of the World. Anyone out there listening? > Loved the editorial voice being so self-aware. > That was clearly a Tom Robbins influence on me -- and I cleaned it up SIGNIFICANTLY from its original form to here. To me, it reads like "author runs out of ideas and admits it" -- haha. I bring the editorial voice back at the end of BOOK TWO so I can pretend I'm artsy, where I'm a lot harder on myself as a writer. Really Derek -- glad you're reading this!
Vivid
11/15/20, 9:35 PM
If you ever get the chance to continue this story I am really looking forward to either Ben joining Matt and James all basically the fallout of James stealing Benz cock
11/15/20, 6:02 PM
Binged the hell out of the original story and book one after reading the forum thread. If this is the way the world ends, I'll line up at the nearest greenhouse. Loved the editorial voice being so self-aware. Looking forward to book two!
11/15/20, 3:50 PM
Pleased keep up this theme! Loved it
Anonymous
11/15/20, 2:50 PM
thank you so much to have included super muscle growth transformation. i wish Andrew took time to admire himself inside the spandex superman costume :-)
11/15/20, 1:09 PM
Great story. Nice take on donkey and chimp trasformation, in a way. And hot to see a great knight brought so low. Thanks!
11/15/20, 12:59 PM
I would like to suggest some “accident” that may have the actual policeman into the party, then they turn those officers and some other guys in the station in a "gay patrol" turning homophopes in the town in more gay people? starting at the streats and ending on the city hall?
11/15/20, 12:55 PM
Well, damn if this didn't hit all my buttons... nice work, gents!
11/15/20, 12:22 PM
Handsdown the best. Thank you for writing this masterpiece and taking my input and morphing it into this amazing story that would be amazing to live through!!! -Hypnoshawn :)