Recent Comments

11/14/20, 10:44 PM
Pup, I am LOVING this series! I know I've read this before but I'm leaking my way through it now like it's my first time! WOOF!
11/14/20, 8:39 PM
So enjoy stories of shrinking cocks, in this case so very small and transforming into a clit.
Nov 14, 2020
Auron
11/14/20, 8:37 PM
Such a hot story! I would love to take a ride on that machine.
Nov 14, 2020
11/14/20, 8:32 PM
There's a lot of shitty writing on this site but this author knows what he's doing. Excellent. Erotic, cerebral, evocative.
11/14/20, 8:24 PM
Locker room shenanigans, hypnotized jocks, BO as a hypnotic trigger... this series hits a lot of buttons for me, PupScout!
Nov 14, 2020
Zac
11/14/20, 8:09 PM
Fuck, man, that was *super* hot!
11/14/20, 8:07 PM
I thought there were some really hot moments in this chapter (as per usual in your stories, PupScout). Still, I couldn't help but feel like a little more distinctive characterization would work wonders. Dan and Kevin and Trevor and Dave all basically seem like the same person, and to me, the story would be hotter if we saw each of them reacting to the situation in different ways (and attempting to resist in different ways).
11/14/20, 8:04 PM
Oh wow, this is a very special surprise! Ive always been an avid fan of this series and I love it a lot! Such a fucking hot story!
11/14/20, 7:54 PM
i want to join the baseball team!
Nov 14, 2020
11/14/20, 6:24 PM
I really enjoyed this, and I thought the induction and mental transformation was extremely well-done. My one criticism is that the impact of the transformation is somewhat dulled by the fact that the main character is such a blank slate from the start; he's only referred to as "the man." If you gave him a name and alluded to his personality and prior life, this would be so much hotter, because we'd get a sense of the identity he's losing when he becomes a mindless cockslave.