Recent Comments

11/14/20, 8:24 PM
Locker room shenanigans, hypnotized jocks, BO as a hypnotic trigger... this series hits a lot of buttons for me, PupScout!
Nov 14, 2020
Zac
11/14/20, 8:09 PM
Fuck, man, that was *super* hot!
11/14/20, 8:07 PM
I thought there were some really hot moments in this chapter (as per usual in your stories, PupScout). Still, I couldn't help but feel like a little more distinctive characterization would work wonders. Dan and Kevin and Trevor and Dave all basically seem like the same person, and to me, the story would be hotter if we saw each of them reacting to the situation in different ways (and attempting to resist in different ways).
11/14/20, 8:04 PM
Oh wow, this is a very special surprise! Ive always been an avid fan of this series and I love it a lot! Such a fucking hot story!
11/14/20, 7:54 PM
i want to join the baseball team!
Nov 14, 2020
11/14/20, 6:24 PM
I really enjoyed this, and I thought the induction and mental transformation was extremely well-done. My one criticism is that the impact of the transformation is somewhat dulled by the fact that the main character is such a blank slate from the start; he's only referred to as "the man." If you gave him a name and alluded to his personality and prior life, this would be so much hotter, because we'd get a sense of the identity he's losing when he becomes a mindless cockslave.
Anonymous
11/14/20, 5:33 PM
Victor had a major glow-up. he also wasn't seen by the group for a while. i think he's the imposter.
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 5:19 PM
the sadist protagonist was a HUGE PLUS for me. mind control is a really awful thing to do to anyone, deserved or not, and sometimes it's lovely to read a hot story about someone getting to use an awful fictional thing for some MAJOR wish fulfillment along with some hot porn. Excellent story, and I seriously wish there were more of it, but I tend to like a good deal of what you write, even if what you write isn't always to my cup of tea.
Anonymous
11/14/20, 3:48 PM
Such an incredible story so far - can't wait to read the others
Anonymous
11/14/20, 3:31 PM
Bro! Brax was my guy from the beginning. Couldn't have asked for a hotter ending for him.