Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/14/20, 3:48 PM
Such an incredible story so far - can't wait to read the others
Anonymous
11/14/20, 3:31 PM
Bro! Brax was my guy from the beginning. Couldn't have asked for a hotter ending for him.
11/14/20, 1:58 PM
Probably the best story i ever read on this website. Good job!
Nov 13, 2020
Jockmorphr
11/14/20, 8:09 AM
Great story and very well written. I loved the dumbing down and the way the domination played out. I hope that we will get to see more of this story. Perhaps Derrick will continue to test the ability of his machine. It would be hot for Derrick to restore Aaron, but with some fun modifications.
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 8:04 AM
Isn't wanting to jump into a story and beat one of the characters an example of how well written it is? ;) It's nice if stories do something to their readers, and Tom always succeeds in doing that to me! If that means that to some people it isn't as hot, that doesn't make it a bad story or anything, just not what you yourself look for here ;). Anyway, well done Tom, I liked it!
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 8:00 AM
Poor Aaron. Dumbing him down wasn't really justified. Otherwise, well-written story. It had a nice flow and gave a lot of background to the characters. Good luck on the next chapters!
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 7:53 AM
Like Hypnoguy67, AnonDragon and NewGuyInTown, I agree that this story is well written in terms of characterization, pacing and planning. However, the pure malice in Derrick's action ruined it. They could have accidentally caused the dumbening, which could be reversed, and they could do each other a heavy mental change as reparation. Derrick didn't want to work out and play sports, well, Aaron could reprogram that. The story could have ended so much more benign and enjoyable for all readers. The cruelty is really unnecessary
Rubken
11/14/20, 7:33 AM
Great story, Mal! I loved your stories! Would really turn on by rubber, tattoos, piercings skinhead forced transformation story. Shamed that some of your old stories were disappeared.
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 5:47 AM
Great story, I wish we could have seen a bit more of stage 1 Dumb Aaron interacting with the outside world and perceiving how much he has fallen
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 3:45 AM
Please don't take my comment above as criticism. The story is excellently written, and it is a credit to the author's detailed characterization that I liked the character of Aaron and felt sorry for him when he was too trusting of Derrick. I frequently enjoy the theme of dumbing down, but I found Derrick's motives to be too malicious and that took away the hot factor for me. I respect the time and talent of the author and the fact that others were turned on by it.