Recent Comments

11/14/20, 1:21 AM
I think the changes are already taking place. Devin was able to keep up with the Super Soldiers and run all the way to the police station. I don't think that would've happened if he wasn't getting some sort of muscle growth, even if he hasn't realized it yet.
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 1:15 AM
This was hot all the way through but when it became clear that Derrick was dumbing Aaron down on purpose I almost came on the spot. Clearly from the above comments it's not to everyone's tastes but fuck, unabashed sadism and cruelty are insanely hot to me. Great writing and pacing, too. Thanks!
11/14/20, 12:47 AM
Ethan getting burgled! Make it as hot as the laundromat please
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 12:42 AM
You're not alone, Hypnoguy67; I really feel like jumping into the story and beating Derrick down for his actions. That's totally uncalled for and has me really upset after reading it. I'll stop here before I mess around and end up hurting someone's feelings.
Kev
11/14/20, 12:36 AM
great start live it
11/14/20, 12:34 AM
Whew!! I was worried that Rugby Boy was going to become Vernon's slave. Glad the soldiers came to save the day. So will we see Devin take his full familiar form in the next chapter?
Nov 13, 2020
11/13/20, 11:53 PM
Am I the only one who feels sorry for Aaron? Great story, though, with such detailed characterizations.
Onitsuka88
11/13/20, 11:47 PM
I get that it's called gay spiral stories but honestly kind of liked the idea of Christine toying with him like she did. It was as if she took those last smoldering embers of his straight side and used those to further ignite a new fire of curiosity within Jesse for cock. As a bi guy I can appreciate both sides and I love the way Jesse's development is coming along.
11/13/20, 11:35 PM
His dad can't wait to grow even bigger, and I can't either! I sense that'll come with a huge bump in libido for him as well :)
11/13/20, 11:14 PM
I'm confused. I'm not sure I understand what I've just read... I liked the premise and the start but the "god" character just confuses me...