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Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 2:36 AM
I'm with Hypnoguy67 and New Guy in Town - this is normally my kind of story, and I still found it hot regardless, but I don't know...I guess I prefer it when the guy who is the target deserved it, or did so on purpose, or it was an accident...this came off as just a tad too malicious by Derrick for such a silly reason. But it was still well written, and clearly some others are really into it, so I wouldn't worry too much about this random person's opinion - guess this story just wasn't my cup of tea.
11/14/20, 1:31 AM
Whoops, I must've read the last line wrong, I thought Devin entered with Rugby Boy. So he's going to show up at the station part-way through Chapter 20. I wonder what he's going to walk in on. Also, I'm *very* curious to see what had Snake so distracted that he didn't rush to save Rugby Boy...
11/14/20, 1:26 AM
> Devin was able to keep up with the Super Soldiers and run all the way to the police station. > You're a little ahead. They left him behind, but told him where to go and to follow. He's trailing them by about a half hour.
11/14/20, 1:24 AM
> So will we see Devin take his full familiar form in the next chapter? > Poor Devin. I mean, has anyone had to prove himself so damn much? He better get something!
11/14/20, 1:21 AM
I think the changes are already taking place. Devin was able to keep up with the Super Soldiers and run all the way to the police station. I don't think that would've happened if he wasn't getting some sort of muscle growth, even if he hasn't realized it yet.
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 1:15 AM
This was hot all the way through but when it became clear that Derrick was dumbing Aaron down on purpose I almost came on the spot. Clearly from the above comments it's not to everyone's tastes but fuck, unabashed sadism and cruelty are insanely hot to me. Great writing and pacing, too. Thanks!
11/14/20, 12:47 AM
Ethan getting burgled! Make it as hot as the laundromat please
Nov 13, 2020
11/14/20, 12:42 AM
You're not alone, Hypnoguy67; I really feel like jumping into the story and beating Derrick down for his actions. That's totally uncalled for and has me really upset after reading it. I'll stop here before I mess around and end up hurting someone's feelings.
Kev
11/14/20, 12:36 AM
great start live it
11/14/20, 12:34 AM
Whew!! I was worried that Rugby Boy was going to become Vernon's slave. Glad the soldiers came to save the day. So will we see Devin take his full familiar form in the next chapter?