Recent Comments

nycboot
11/13/20, 1:56 PM
I already liked this story but it's becoming even more intriguing. The sex is also wonderful because by now we're really tied up with the characters. It's so funny: At the ouset you had Jese appear like some dumb kid brother, very inarticulate, more of a bother than a character. At this point, Jese is the lead character, having pushed Dennis to a lower priority long ago. What I really love about this story - that makes it different from any other story I've read on this site - is that we get to experience all the mental and emotional struggles Jese is going through. I totally love that because it seems much more realistic. It's also hot, seeing Jese struggle in his mind but his body doing something else. And now with the introduction of Charles makes Jese even more wound up. A great idea for the narrative! Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
11/13/20, 12:51 PM
Please make another chapter
Anonymous
11/13/20, 12:43 PM
Please make another chapter! This is hot
Anonymous
11/13/20, 12:36 PM
Please make more. The hunky uncle should grab a ride and see how things are going....
Anonymous
11/13/20, 12:32 PM
That was hot! Plz make more
Richard Redman
11/13/20, 12:03 PM
A great picture of our future.
Anonymous
11/13/20, 9:33 AM
This story keeps getting better and better! I love it! Can't wait to see more!
Jockmorphr
11/13/20, 7:20 AM
Very exciting first chapter. Well written and definitely intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more!
11/13/20, 7:17 AM
Awesome Story! I wish the bearmaker would find me.
11/13/20, 7:16 AM
Thank you for the feed back so far, yes i agree it seemed to have been finished off to quickly. i have opened it up as a community story now. it need more meat on the bones so to speak with Andy's intense training to become Squad Leader, maybe it could do with another chapter once the new recruits have been captured. Can i ask is it stays a skinhead with tattoos, Rubber story.