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11/12/20, 9:14 PM
@Bigger - Thanks man! I know you saw that it's explained in the next chapter, but I just wanted to tag on a little of my thinking here. The magic in this story isn't exactly literal when it takes its orders. When Ethan cast the spell on Sam, all Taylor wanted was a fuckbuddy who didn't need all the romantic stuff. Instead of shifting that one thing about Sam, it changed Sam completely so that he's the kind of guy who just wants to get laid without romance. In other words, it shifts the individual until they're the person who fulfills the want, rather than just changing one specific aspect of them. So when Ethan casts the love spell, it doesn't shift him into a straight guy who's somehow in love with his roommate. It shifts him into a gay guy who's fallen for his roommate.
11/12/20, 6:26 PM
Man, THIS is what I want my writing to be. Such a well-delivered narrative, amazing characterization, hot as hell, and a bit of ambiguity at the end... absolutely outstanding. My only wish is that you spent more time on the sex itself, but that's just a personal preference. This is some excellent, excellent work.
11/12/20, 6:04 PM
Robin needs better than a virgin. Tyler should take on the whole team to gain the skills he needs!
11/12/20, 5:22 PM
I. LOVE. THIS! ♥️♥️♥️ Great writing with the sexual tension building up. Can't wait to see how this develops.
11/12/20, 5:02 PM
I really love how you changed the point of view in each chapter, man! And that also answers my question from the previous chapter! Nice series, man!
11/12/20, 4:51 PM
Love how the things are changing! Just a little question though: was Ethan bisexual all along and just playing the straight bro act? The sudden interest in his roommate caught me offguard, not that I complain though!
11/12/20, 4:31 PM
Nice chapter, I like stories where employees get brainwashed and stuff, pretty good stuff! I also really love rubber! I'm not a huge fan of cigarettes but you wrote it so erotically here so I didn't mind as much. I somewhat agree with the first comment that there were some parts that could be restructured like some of the dialogue but it didn't distract me that much. It'll be exciting if we see more employees getting brainwashed!
11/12/20, 4:10 PM
Erotically exceptional! I need a new hobby for the second wave!
11/12/20, 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, Martin.
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11/12/20, 3:29 PM
Hot story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!