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11/12/20, 6:26 PM
Man, THIS is what I want my writing to be. Such a well-delivered narrative, amazing characterization, hot as hell, and a bit of ambiguity at the end... absolutely outstanding. My only wish is that you spent more time on the sex itself, but that's just a personal preference. This is some excellent, excellent work.
11/12/20, 6:04 PM
Robin needs better than a virgin. Tyler should take on the whole team to gain the skills he needs!
11/12/20, 5:22 PM
I. LOVE. THIS! ♥️♥️♥️ Great writing with the sexual tension building up. Can't wait to see how this develops.
11/12/20, 5:02 PM
I really love how you changed the point of view in each chapter, man! And that also answers my question from the previous chapter! Nice series, man!
11/12/20, 4:51 PM
Love how the things are changing! Just a little question though: was Ethan bisexual all along and just playing the straight bro act? The sudden interest in his roommate caught me offguard, not that I complain though!
11/12/20, 4:31 PM
Nice chapter, I like stories where employees get brainwashed and stuff, pretty good stuff! I also really love rubber! I'm not a huge fan of cigarettes but you wrote it so erotically here so I didn't mind as much. I somewhat agree with the first comment that there were some parts that could be restructured like some of the dialogue but it didn't distract me that much. It'll be exciting if we see more employees getting brainwashed!
11/12/20, 4:10 PM
Erotically exceptional! I need a new hobby for the second wave!
11/12/20, 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, Martin.
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11/12/20, 3:29 PM
Hot story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
11/12/20, 3:23 PM
Whenever I see your name, I have to click. Every story you write is so good! I was actually thinking to message you to ask if you were still writing. I hope you are going to keep on writing! I would love to see the conversion of the sons to join their father.