Recent Comments

11/12/20, 12:12 PM
This. Is. GREAT!!!
Ng5hvlo4
11/12/20, 12:11 PM
it is a good start, but it was difficult to follow the dialogue (using " " and new paragraphs for that would help), and while the introduction and MC scenes were well thought out, it felt rushed to get to the point where the recruit became a Squad Leader and went out to the streets with the others (who were not mentioned at all before then, making it feel out of place). The rubber aspect was a nice touch, but (at least for me) the smoking aspect took away from the hot factor; I'm sure others will disagree with me on that point.
11/12/20, 10:25 AM
Well done on the story so far, I'm a sucker for a man in a slutty outfit, so it's always nice to see that transformation. And there's something great to the "friends rewritten as lovers" parts that appear also. Diversity is always fun, though it's sad that it makes the collages more difficult to pull together. Obviously there needs to be greater revealing clothes representation for men everywhere. As for suggestions, I'd second the staff needing some more attention. Maybe a scantily-costumed tout on the street to help get more customers in. The other idea that I've had rattling around for a while was a bachelor party. Obnoxious as a group, but quickly converted to a slutty wedding party, when the best man is promoted to other groom. Anyway, keep up the good work!
Mr E
11/12/20, 9:24 AM
@Lusty Stallion the pictures are always a nice feature in these stories. My idea was a group of white people turn into those ethnicities. Maybe like a bouncer in the club or more club staff. No matter where you take the story I can't wait to read it.
Anonymous
11/12/20, 9:24 AM
It's a good start. Looking forward to what comes next.
11/12/20, 8:22 AM
Always good to have MAL back.
11/12/20, 8:18 AM
Please continue this!
Martin
11/12/20, 7:29 AM
> Maybe you could check with Martin if he can transfer the chapters in the old series to this one… The "owner" of the old series is still HypnoFanatic and I just don't want to take their ownership away. I'm fine with creating a new series as a continuation, and I agree, it would be perfect to add a link to the original series. I took the liberty of adding that link to your story.
11/12/20, 6:18 AM
Hi! This is one of the best series here, thank you for providing such a great dumb hypnotist character! As for the content, I prefer when Ethan is a bottom, the laundromat was waaaay hotter to me than this chapter. So I vote for the Uber part, with the suggestion than some drug events occur in the club (I picture Ethan very well getting high with xtc he'd "accidently" asked for and ending up in another gangbang before taking his Uber). But whatever you'll write I can't wait to read it!
11/12/20, 5:54 AM
:P this story is a cluster of hot and funny. I vote for burglers!