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11/12/20, 10:46 PM
Awesome! there's not enough stories of nerdification, that's still an underated theme. Its all great, but I especially like when Dan loses his courage and confidence. Although it's not exactly gay, I can get certain flavor of it, I like it.
11/12/20, 10:45 PM
Although not a turn-on for me, this story was an excellently written description of transformation with well-developed characters. Another unique feature was the direction of the change; usually it's in reverse from nerd to jock. The story also makes you wonder if magic is involved in the transformation or if the lingering touches are just the development of the friendship. Great job, jockedguy!
11/12/20, 10:42 PM
This was good fun! Love me a muscle god story!
11/12/20, 9:54 PM
Jockedguy - you are one of my most favorite authors! While I didn't actually bust a nut to this particular story (I tend to prefer blue collar/dumber transformations myself), it was amazingly well written and incredibly entertaining. Thanks for posting this.... hope we don't have to wait so long for your next masterpiece! :)
11/12/20, 9:14 PM
@Bigger - Thanks man! I know you saw that it's explained in the next chapter, but I just wanted to tag on a little of my thinking here. The magic in this story isn't exactly literal when it takes its orders. When Ethan cast the spell on Sam, all Taylor wanted was a fuckbuddy who didn't need all the romantic stuff. Instead of shifting that one thing about Sam, it changed Sam completely so that he's the kind of guy who just wants to get laid without romance. In other words, it shifts the individual until they're the person who fulfills the want, rather than just changing one specific aspect of them. So when Ethan casts the love spell, it doesn't shift him into a straight guy who's somehow in love with his roommate. It shifts him into a gay guy who's fallen for his roommate.
11/12/20, 6:26 PM
Man, THIS is what I want my writing to be. Such a well-delivered narrative, amazing characterization, hot as hell, and a bit of ambiguity at the end... absolutely outstanding. My only wish is that you spent more time on the sex itself, but that's just a personal preference. This is some excellent, excellent work.
11/12/20, 6:04 PM
Robin needs better than a virgin. Tyler should take on the whole team to gain the skills he needs!
11/12/20, 5:22 PM
I. LOVE. THIS! ♥️♥️♥️ Great writing with the sexual tension building up. Can't wait to see how this develops.
11/12/20, 5:02 PM
I really love how you changed the point of view in each chapter, man! And that also answers my question from the previous chapter! Nice series, man!
11/12/20, 4:51 PM
Love how the things are changing! Just a little question though: was Ethan bisexual all along and just playing the straight bro act? The sudden interest in his roommate caught me offguard, not that I complain though!