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Anon
1/20/25, 1:28 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) There's also something else I've been thinking about as well. Earlier chapters if I remember correctly indicate Yousef's family had to deal with war and civil unrest in Lebanon before coming to the states- and historically it would make sense- Lebanon in the past century has seen religious tensions and civil war. To that end, Mahmood might not just be scared for his son, but also potentially angry as well at Yousef for just stopping communication. There's a more personal element to that. Unlike most of the other weres, none of them have ever really deal with having to experience human conflict on a large scale even if indirectly. Werewolf fights yes- but nothing that is a large scale conflict. Even Mullins at best was dealing with small scale thugs. As difficult as werewolf life is, that's one thing they've been fortunate to dodge. Yousef likely doesn't want to see his father because he knows in line of that- he has screwed up. Simply dropping off the face of the earth is not as easy for him as it is for the other weres. He probably thought he'd be able to get away with just ghosting his family but well...he really should have known better. At the same time- I get why he did it. Explaining what has happened to him would practically be impossible- not to mention potentially put his family at risk- or worse have a repeat of what happened to the FBI agent happening. In all honesty, Mahmood being a mondjugen is probably about to make Yousef's life very complicated....and not in a good way.

1/20/25, 2:53 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) Glad to see you picked up on Mo's and Yousef's family history. That plays a part, in good time. Thank you for the comments, bro!
1/18/25, 2:36 AM
Hey everyone! I hope this meets everyone’s expectations and if it did not I’m sorry. If it did. Please give the story a favorite for me. I would appreciate it far more than you know. Take care and I hope you enjoyed!

1/20/25, 12:18 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Very satisfying, hot AF, beautiful reworking, love the added depth and color, high stakes for all going into the final chapter. I'll echo other commenters' thoughts on Leviathan/Colt - could be a prequel in the making. This story will stay with me.

nycboot
1/20/25, 1:44 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) Wait a second: I thought the "favorite" thing was only for the user. Does it appear as a "rating" for the particular story/chapter?

1/20/25, 1:47 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) I see who "favorites" each chapter etc

1/20/25, 2:03 AM
@[HypnoMutt](/user/show/10022083) LOL I am not sure if I'm smart enough to write it to make a prequel....Colt would probably be a pretty stoic ass during those years and no Rocky....be interesting
1/19/25, 11:05 PM
Man, I would’ve liked to see this continued.
1/19/25, 3:10 PM
I love the worldbuilding here! I don’t know anything at all about the actual world of Pokémon, but this fashion show along with the creative breeding was so interesting. And **fuck**, oral knotting? Brutal roadhead facefucks? A daisy chain right at the end? That shit was hot. I’m excited to see the cum inflation tag come to fruition, too. I’ll be looking forward to more.

1/19/25, 3:12 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) I forgot to add how much I valued your portrayal of mental illness in this story—thanks for not shying away from reality even in scorching fantasy smut.

1/19/25, 8:59 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thanks so much for your comments as always, Soren, they're always really helpful for keeping me wanting to write. Sorry you had to read the unformatted version--I've got an update currently pending acceptance that should make reading this much more pleasant an experience. Pun intended. On a more serious note, also thank you for the compliment on mental illness specifically! My favorite thing to write is the intimacy and connection between characters, both externally and within the perspective character's inner dialogue with themselves, because I think that makes writing hotter, and _realism_ even in the weird Pokemon fanfiction I wanted to write was a core tenet of the series, so here we are. It has the unfortunate (for some) side effect of ending up making me write my smut with a bit more personality than I think most people might be looking for, but clearly they aren't my audience, haha. :)
Anonymous
1/19/25, 8:39 PM
I really hope Rocky gets to be himself again and Leviathan gets what he deserves!
1/16/25, 3:50 PM
Nice first story! Can't wait to see where this goes. Btw I've been looking for a chinese friend in the community to have fun while slowly learning mandarin. If you want to be friends, let me know hehe

1/16/25, 4:15 PM
@[piedric](/user/show/628374) I am adjusting some paragraphs so that the next chapter can be published legally. Currently, I have not been to the website many times, so I may not be able to reply to messages in time. If there is an opportunity, I will talk about other topics:)

1/19/25, 8:28 PM
@[lingd](/user/show/10010015) Oh, are there some sort of legal restrictions? Anyways, if you want we don't have to chat in the website. Discord perhaps, or any other suitable messaging apps.
1/19/25, 4:34 PM
Super hot story, Jack. I can't wait to hear more of Pete's adventures. Thanks...LLOYD
1/19/25, 6:08 AM
Incredible work with him wrestling with these thoughts. The description of that warm bed was delicious. Keep it up....!
DomTop4MuscleSub
6/19/20, 1:33 AM
Next up, Thor definitely needs to begin experiencing chastity. He'll get very familiar with his ass after he starts using toys for pleasure, when his only two options are them or Lan's dick.

Anonymous
1/19/25, 4:52 AM
@DomTop4MuscleSub My thoughts exactly!
1/19/25, 3:19 AM
Great story. I'm happy to see something new from you.