Recent Comments

11/11/20, 11:52 PM
@Ruffcub - Thanks man! I wasn't sure quite where to cut the cliffhanger, so chapter 3 actually backtracks a little from another POV, just to get the coverage. @Nupiter - That'd be a weird thing to lie about bro. Yeah, like I mentioned, I thought this was gonna be a single shot story. But you horny fuckers got the better of me, so here we are ;) @Catalust - Thanks! It'll be a combination of Ethan's puppy love and Sam's manipulation. @absman420 - Thank you sir! I had no idea it was a love spell til the words appeared on my screen. Pesky fingers, always making stuff up without asking me. @TexMuscle - Thanks man! The story circle is great for helping structure, but I gotta be honest - the thing that new writers gotta do most is *write*. Don't worry too much about anything else but getting words on paper. Once that's second nature, that's a good time to focus on tightening your plots and making your dialog better. Write something that gets you off, not something you think is technically perfect. Sure, some of the comments on this site can be brutal, but don't worry about the haters. Just write something you wanna read.
11/11/20, 10:53 PM
I wrote a story last year titled [PHOLUS REBORN](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/655873) that relied heavily on the Greek Myths, using obscure characters, but still using the mythology as a backdrop for the story. This story reminds me of that vein -- using religious mythology as a backdrop. That it happens to be the Xian mythology could really ruffle some feathers, but I hope people instead read it as I suggest. Honestly, it's a good start. Keep going.
11/11/20, 10:42 PM
Great trilogy -- succinct but satisfying. Liked the POV this chapter. It all worked. Well done!
11/11/20, 10:37 PM
Really good story, I'd like the symbiote to grow a cock and fuck the next encased convert.
11/11/20, 9:11 PM
Very hot trilogy. The switch in pov's is a great mechanism to continue the storyline. Awesome writing as usual, Derek.
Mar 20, 2015
11/11/20, 9:07 PM
next?
Anonymous
11/11/20, 9:04 PM
voting for the burglers
Author
11/11/20, 7:14 PM
The term 'dragon' has many connotations. We'll see.
11/11/20, 6:09 PM
I think I'll go for the burglar story. This is so hilarious, I love this whole series! Ethan is just such a unique main character, and I love how creative the chapters get, Really one of the best story currently, albeit I'm not so much into degrading, so this chapter was a little less hot for me than the others two.
11/11/20, 5:51 PM
Great conclusion! Most of all I'm happy that Sam got taken down a peg or six with the final enchantment. I don't like "alpha bros" in real life, so reading about them isn't fun, either--but the newest version of Sam is much more manageable. Fantastic ending! :)