Recent Comments

11/12/20, 4:31 PM
Nice chapter, I like stories where employees get brainwashed and stuff, pretty good stuff! I also really love rubber! I'm not a huge fan of cigarettes but you wrote it so erotically here so I didn't mind as much. I somewhat agree with the first comment that there were some parts that could be restructured like some of the dialogue but it didn't distract me that much. It'll be exciting if we see more employees getting brainwashed!
11/12/20, 4:10 PM
Erotically exceptional! I need a new hobby for the second wave!
11/12/20, 3:55 PM
Thank you very much, Martin.
Anonymous
11/12/20, 3:29 PM
Hot story! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
11/12/20, 3:23 PM
Whenever I see your name, I have to click. Every story you write is so good! I was actually thinking to message you to ask if you were still writing. I hope you are going to keep on writing! I would love to see the conversion of the sons to join their father.
11/12/20, 2:39 PM
@Stroppy Author & @BobbyBlobfish: Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate it. I'm definitely feeling a bit of writer's remorse about poor Maxwell. this chapter was always going to end with him losing Ethan, but in retrospect I should have made it more of a Mr. Scrooge moment where he resolves to be nicer and more open in the future. I think I'll write in a reference to him in a later chapter where we learn that he's doing juuuust fine now that he's out of the fetish closet. @EliKai: Thank you!!! @SmwrLs: Thanks! Lol, part of the reason this chapter took so long is because it's hard to write Ethan as a top. It's naturally incompatible with him being so hapless and suggestible. The power dynamics kept on getting very... conventional without constantly tweaking Maxwell's state of mind to make sure he "stayed in charge" despite being hypnotized. And rest assured about Uber, the only reason the storyline happens at all is because Ethan is very much high on E and in the mood to ride dick.
11/12/20, 2:07 PM
Excellent writing! I love the tension between Tyler and Robin, and look forward to what happens next.
Anonymous
11/12/20, 1:43 PM
I loved how Tyler started acting like a puppy before Robin needing to get trained.
Maxigay
11/12/20, 1:38 PM
Very good story, all reference to uniforms and rubber makes it very morbid, perhaps Ng5hvlo4's comment about the hasty in the conversion of a leader is very fast, the same in the capture of his children, perhaps if the idea was to be a continuous series She would have faced more calmly, it all depends now if you follow her which would be fantastic.
Anonymous
11/12/20, 1:20 PM
Tyler reminds me of German Shepherd ,which means that he needs to be trained well ; )