Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/11/20, 5:23 AM
extremely good, as always!!! your writing style kicks ass and the situations you come up with are always sexy and exciting. you did almost too good a job this time lmao, i'm a little bit sad we won't be seeing more of maxwell. i love a good bossy/bratty sub and the dynamic of him not being able to cum until he got over himself and praised ethan was extremely good, so i have to say i grew ever so slightly attached to him. as for what to write next, i think my vote is for burglars! ill go into a little depth if thats something you want, and if not just count my choice and move on -the uber one sounds really fun and sexy and i'd be excited to read it, it just isn't quiiite as evocative/fresh an image as i think the other two are -im REALLY REALLY interested by the idea of insults/stereotypes slowly and accidentally becoming true, but since i'm kind of a comeuppance sort of guy with a weak soft heart i think i'd end up feeling mostly a little bad for this gay guy who gets slurs yelled at him and then has his personality irrevocably altered for probably not the better -not only does the burglar one have a lot of potential for hot writing, but even just the idea of ethan's dopey cheerful approach to conflict being applied to this situation makes me grin. of course i have to see that in action -and of course, no matter what you write, i'll be excited to read it!!
11/11/20, 5:09 AM
Fuck man, I just discovered this story and I got to say, this is one of my favorite things ever. Dumb jock is my favorite trope of all time and you did so well with this story, it's so inventive, creative and sexy! And Ethan is just so hot, I can't even. I liked that you made Ethan a vers, although I do prefer to see him topping, so I'm going to vote for the Ethan Gets Burgled story! Man, I loved that you described the story in the summary as Ethan "fucking his way out of" situations, cause I love this kind of erotic stories where the main character has to fuck to solve problems or everything in their lives comes down to fucking. I think this is so hot and there aren't many stories out there like this so thank you for writing this amazing series. I'd like to suggest a chapter of Ethan getting into trouble with his older, middle-aged gay neighbor. I was thinking Ethan could maybe do the lawn of his neighbor for cash and is always wearing skimpy shorts with no underwear while he does it, his hot body and big dick on display. And this gay neighbor only hired Ethan cause he is so in lust for him and just wants Ethan to fuck his brains out, but Ethan is so dumb all of his neighbor's attempts to seduce him fail cause Ethan is just oblivious. But, to the neighbor's luck, Ethan is just so dumb that he ends up creating the perfect situation for him to fuck the older guy due to his hypnotic eyes and poorly thought words. Hope you like the suggestions. Cheers man!
Anonymous
11/11/20, 3:04 AM
like where it's going
Sexcrab
11/11/20, 2:57 AM
The Baron is the dragon disguised? A sex mystery awaits the next chapters.
Anonymous
11/11/20, 2:15 AM
The baseball Star. Would be hot too see what happens to him.
11/11/20, 12:27 AM
This is great. Love the twists. Thanks for the tip with the story circle. I want to try a story idea I have and this tip looks like a good start...
11/11/20, 12:16 AM
Fun, enjoyable story. I look forward to moving on
11/10/20, 11:01 PM
super hot as usual, Ethan sure does keep getting himself in some crazy situations! I vote burgled, followed closely by slides into third!
Anonymous
11/10/20, 10:48 PM
Baseball star for sure!