I would like to see a baseball star turned gay~

Bugger the burglars!! Great story fun and sexy!

Ethan Gets Burgled

My vote is for the Uber

Superb

I can't wait to read Ethan gets burgled!!! I love this series sooo much!

One of the most enjoyable twists I've found on here. Can't wait to see what sort of magic Ethan's new puppy love motivates him to try!

Oooh, but I very much enjoy the way this is going! The first chapter was hot as hell (and tbh, your stuff always is, not gonna lie). But there's something fantastic in the way this story began saying "...and then what...?" beyond the initial ending. I loved seeing it push past that initial ending in a fun & interesting way. And honestly, it worked out *great*. In a lot of ways, this second chapter is even hotter than the first. I'm definitely looking forward to reading what comes next.

Awesome, awesome, awesome...! Great setup and a terrific idea which has me super excited for the next part. Bring it on!

@ MonsterMash62 > Did my comment on part one help this happen? I hope so :) Damn right it did. How about I take the credit and you take the blame ;) > I loved this. I loved that you switched POVs. Had to. The magic works so people are oblivious. I couldn't describe the changes to Taylor without swapping POVs. Had to break the fourth wall to make it happen, hope that felt a little fun. > I love that you thought to use the mirror. There's a certain bar I always picture for my club scenes. It's got mirrors on the dance floor walls. Just seemed natural, given how I made the magic work in Fuck Buddy. > I love that you’ve set it up for another part. Good things come in threes. It felt right from a story structure perspective. > I love that Ethan is jealous all of a sudden and oblivious that he spelled himself. That's just how the magic from Fuck Buddy worked, so I went with it. I thought he was gonna spell himself into being obsessed with Taylor. Didn't know it was love until I wrote the sentence. > I love that Sam is such a prick. I loved pretty much everything about it. Sam used to be a twink who made the entire thing about himself, not giving a damn what his partner wanted. Now Sam's a power vers who treats men like disposable dildos. An asshole's an asshole. > Thanks for posting another chapter so quickly. I wish I had your ability to write stuff so quickly that is still so high quality. Do you even have to edit? Dan Harmon has this thing he calls a "Story Circle". It's an eight step simplification of the Hero's Journey. I start with those eight steps, write around 500 words to outline them, fix all the problems with the story at that stage, and then once I'm happy I just start writing using my outline as a guide. No, I didn't proofread or edit it at that point, though I did occasionally take a second run at a paragraph when it didn't feel right - all the editing happened at the structural level. @anon - Thanks man! @TransformHeaven What makes you think there's gonna be a part three? (Yeah, there's gonna be a part three.) @Feed Your Head - There's a buddy of mine that I turn into a puddle of infatuation around. I was channeling that. @anon2 Thank you sir! I get bored if there's no twist. @Hypnoguy67 - I'm so glad the POV shift worked. Sometimes it doesn't, cause you've bonded with the first character too much. One of my favourite movies is "Slacker" by Richard Linklater, mostly for the POV shifts. @JockPupTraxxx - Thank ye' sir! @Cris Kane - Just lucky I guess. At least you know about the twist - Ethan still thinks the love spell dissipated. Part 3 will be called "Fucking Buddies", unless it isn't.