Recent Comments

11/10/20, 8:51 AM
I really like this series, but the way Bud was talking to Brad, it made it seem like he had ulterior motives. I really hope he leaves Brad and Stu alone and doesn't make them his slaves as well.
11/10/20, 8:11 AM
This is a hot story. There should be more to it.
11/10/20, 7:39 AM
The best part of this is the setup for part 3 ;)
Anonymous
11/10/20, 6:45 AM
terrific
11/10/20, 6:36 AM
Did my comment on part one help this happen? I hope so :) I loved this. I loved that you switched POVs. I love that you thought to use the mirror. I love that you’ve set it up for another part. I love that Ethan is jealous all of a sudden and oblivious that he spelled himself. I love that Sam is such a prick. I loved pretty much everything about it. Thanks for posting another chapter so quickly. I wish I had your ability to write stuff so quickly that is still so high quality. Do you even have to edit?
11/10/20, 6:04 AM
Can't wait for more, I love it.
Nov 9, 2020
Jimmy M
11/10/20, 5:11 AM
I loved it, i would love to maybe see it continue!
Anonymous
11/10/20, 4:51 AM
This was a great continuation! Looking forward to seeing where you take this if you choose to continue it. Keep up the good work here and on your blog.
11/10/20, 4:12 AM
Great first chapter! Strange set up that I've never seen before, and it's very hot!