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11/10/20, 12:52 AM
This was quite sexy. I liked the magic. I alo liked how our pov guy ended on top, that was cool.
giveintothemusk
11/10/20, 12:36 AM
What an excellent story!
11/9/20, 10:18 PM
I honestly think that the idea of there being a Cousin Chris who is a super bottom who whispers into Jese's ears about needing cock while he mindlessly bounces on Jese's lap in his own subby mood would have been an extremely hot, sexy scene. Instead we got a character who was deeply annoying and a scene that made me skip the whole part of the story. I honestly only continued to read, after an actual walk away from the story for a moment, because you wrote it and I figured from past experience it would be good. So yeah, this is my opinion. Her presence was nothing good, not at all.
Anonymous
11/9/20, 8:45 PM
What a very touching and sad story! Thank you for this. I'm not into the spanking either but it worked for the story. Even though Lock accepted that it was good and natural to be an "invert", in an era before the word "homosexuality" was well-known outside medical journals, he probably would have perceived both spanking and anal penetration as different kinds of "perversions", rather than anal being the "default" kind of same-sex intimacy. And I can't help but feel that the ending, swimming into the ocean, is symbolic of how profound Lock and Sawyer's isolation would have been, the two of them against the world, even had Lock joined Sawyer all those years before, and the isolation of gay men in society in general at the time. More bitter than sweet. I feel silly saying it, but I've never teared up at a story on a gay smut website before. Maybe it's just the coronavirus isolation getting to me.
11/9/20, 8:34 PM
Yes I did catch the cameo. I was wandering if Sargent Wendt spontaneous came when the scientist and General were interviewing Wendt. But Book 2 has answered the question and the scientist wasn't described as unusually muscular.
11/9/20, 8:23 PM
Becoming two beasts? Interesting. I want to change my answer -Braxton's moment of introspection likely let's him out, but I don't have a new guess yet.
Eric
11/9/20, 7:28 PM
I really love the twists in your stories. Please continue to write. Brilliant job!
Nov 9, 2020
11/9/20, 7:18 PM
Really nice story! The way the photos are put really give a rhythm to the writing! Albeit, I must agree, things felt a bit rushed at the end, I wasn't sure at first if the hypnosis was done on purpose or not. Still great, thought!
11/9/20, 7:00 PM
God I love a role reversal. HOT
11/9/20, 6:47 PM
Hot story, bro!