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11/9/20, 11:23 AM
Good stuff. Straight-forward and fun... pardon the pun.
Elmara
11/9/20, 5:01 AM
Hey, dude! Wow, this was a GREAT chapter, as always. It never ceases to amaze me how fast and well you write and you always take me by surprise when I log into the site and see you have posted a new chapter of one of my favorite stories ever when I was not even expecting it... it's such a good, warm feeling! It makes me so happy! Here are the things I love love love about it: 1) Jese is still someway in denial about his cock slut status, making the bet with Dennis and doing things in a way that gives him "plausible deniability" for getting fucked. I love this, and I love the slow build up and change to Jese's character. Keep it up; 2) I loved that the in game world of the dating sim was more sexualized, with Jese noticing that everything around him was leading up to situations that could or would turn into sex. I'm not sure about the cousin and the het sex but I thought it was hot how sex was portrayed as something super natural and easy to get the way the cousin came onto him. I think if it was a hot male cousin it would've been better, but I'm not too bothered by it!; 3) Loved the hard fucking with Thomas and the repetitive, rhythmic words he kept saying to Jese about him being a cock slut, loving cock, accepting cock... I love this kind of stuff and I love to see the top repeatedly calling his bottom a slut or a whore, all the time. Keep this up, it will be super hot if Dennis keeps calling Jese a slut in real life and inside the games and Jese resists him and rebuffs him but not in a strong way, not really bothered by it, cause he knows it's true, he justs contests it to save face. All that being said, dude, I CAN'T WAIT to see how things will go inside Star World in a more traditional, MMORPG, fantasy setting, please write about it soon, I really can't wait!! Love this story, thank you so much!!!
11/9/20, 2:56 AM
Another genius Derek Williams story. No one does the "be careful what you wish for" theme better than you!
11/9/20, 1:26 AM
The deputy had earned a plant but was put on hold because Tully had only interacted with him posing as the Sheriff. The Sheriff thought it wouldn't be the last time they saw her. So could a human that had ingested the cum from two pollinated alphas been controlled as a Great One? It appears the symbiotic relationship is too great? It would have been a fun twist to see the Deputy kneel before Snake but not the Sheriff. And Snake turn on the Sheriff and eventually loose control of the deputy. The Sheriff wouldn't have known he was double-crossed because he took his eye off his balls when filling in for the mayor. Our libidos can image different situations that could drag the story on forever. A testament to your brilliance.
11/9/20, 12:57 AM
Now this I like. It's hot, a novel concept, and it's modeled on my favorite horror film. It's also, dare I say, inspirational ;)
Anonymous
11/9/20, 12:55 AM
excellent excellent work...thanks !!
11/9/20, 12:18 AM
@MonsterMash62 - Fuck man, I just meant to write a quick jerk off story. Now I've got to be thinking about sequels! (Seriously, that's a good idea, I'll put it in the idea box, no promise if it'll ever happen.) @Transformheaven - Thank you sir. Probably not perfect, but good enough to share.
11/9/20, 12:03 AM
Thank you for your comments! @PupScout you make great points, and the sex drive of the soldiers is actually part of the development of the story. thank you for your tips :) @Lakritz24 I see what you mean, and I agree with you. this story is meant to be a dystopia, these are not good guys. I'll try to make that point clearer as it goes on