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1/18/25, 9:23 PM
Nice, love it!
1/18/25, 9:03 PM
I like this, the slow build up makes me want to keep on reading! Can't wait for the second part!
1/18/25, 1:17 AM
I loved it! I'm so glad Colt finally managed to save Rocky. Well, Leviathan is still in the picture and it seems he still has a weak connection with Rocky and still has three heroes under his control, so it's not a definitive victory yet. I really want to know how extensive the changes caused by the fusion between Black Eagle and the real Rocky are. From what we've seen, the programs that Leviathan put in Rocky's mind so he would see him as his Master continue, but the fusion made it so that instead of Leviathan, Colt is Rocky's Master. But I wonder how the fusion affected Rocky's personality. And once again the mystery of the connection between Leviathan and Colt. What does Leviathan really want with my poor boy? Wasn't killing his parents enough? I really want to know what the root of Leviathan's obsession with Colt is. Does he just want to torment an old victim for fun? Does he just see Colt as a nuisance? Maybe he himself desires Colt in some twisted way and wants to make sure he has nothing left in life before he can claim him? One thing is for sure, there is a history between Leviathan and Colt beyond the murder of Colt's parents, and I really want to know what that history is. I'm also really hoping that when Leviathan is defeated once and for all (if he is defeated, of course), Volocity Wing, Voltedge, and Iron Claw can have their minds restored if they haven't already been broken beyond recovery. It would be kind of sad if in the end they end up forgotten or doomed to stay in a vegetative state like Iron Claw was after being defeated by Rocky in the first chapter.

1/18/25, 8:57 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thanks for your support.
1/18/25, 8:56 PM
I LOVE the slow build up. It’s going to make the payoff that much better. Great work!
1/18/25, 3:43 AM
I loved the change. Here I leave you my theory and an idea in case you want to take it into account. (I put references about the LGBT-themed book: The Extraordinaries). Theory 1. Leviathan somehow had some kind of close relationship with Colt's family, since there is no way that Leviathan would know Colt's name and want to kidnap him.... So Colt somehow has some kind of superpower and it was of a higher level than normal to be able to control it and so his parents blocked or suppressed it and maybe that's why Leviathan killed Colt's parents. Theory 2. Why does Leviathan want Colt to be unstable? Movies, series and comics have shown us that if someone who has superpowers is unstable in some way, their power can manifest in a more dangerous and uncontrolled way. Here I leave the idea in case you want to take it into account: In the book that I take as a reference, the protagonist (who "has no powers") was helping his superhero boyfriend to defeat a villain, but the villain makes him fall from a tall building and somehow that makes the protagonist's brain, seeing the danger of death, forced him to release his repressed powers and this causes the debris that fell along with the protagonist, to levitate with him, which makes you understand that he has a telekinesis superior to normal thanks to his mother and maternal grandfather (who were heroes in their time). Here you can put a similar situation with Colt in the next part (if you wish).

1/18/25, 8:54 PM
@[Belfertan88](/user/show/10011380) It is clear there is SOMETHING between those two.
1/18/25, 3:05 PM
I'm looking forward to much more in this saga.

1/18/25, 8:54 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks!
1/18/25, 2:13 PM
Ooh another banger of a chapter. And im picking up the pieces you putting down. A threesome endgame, woohoo

1/18/25, 3:17 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Hey, sometimes you foreshadow with a feather, and sometimes you foreshadow with a hammer :) Glad you are enjoying it.

1/18/25, 8:00 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) I cant wait for the finale to figure out what triggers these two men to be gay switch and a bratty sub bottom. Oh and also hope for Jon to realise that he is in charge of the two and that he needs to treat them better.
1/17/25, 11:41 PM
Wow. Just wow. Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. The domination and control were level 10. And then that sweet submission and acceptance. With Alex, I thought it would be more of the usual Tri-Hard, with his sadistic, forceful subjugation of his targets. But here, he offered what Alex wanted but couldn't admit. Though it could be said that having Nick wipe him was more of his original MO. But then he gave him away to the guy Alex was already playing with. Not his MO. And this was made even more clear with his scene with Nick. And wow what a scene. How he finally got Nick to break through his last resistance and embrace what he always wanted. And again with a choice. The dynamics between these two was palpable. So was the emotion. Both want the other. The only kink I can think of to threaten this duo would be that 'thinking too much' mentality. As in what would happen when the 'good guys' break through to Nick by getting him to 'think again' and remember? What would that even do to him? Yet I suspect that this 'no thinking' will be more of a misnomer. I suspect that Nick will mentally grow into his new role and just 'not think' of whatever isn't needed as a slave. And finally with Reggie. Tri-Hard/Kurt doesn't want mindlessness, but control and obedience. A different tack then what he did last time. And I like this evolution of his means to his ends in this chapter. Yeah, the choices made may have been dubious at best. But still, I am liking how Tri-Hard is currently operating.

1/18/25, 11:22 AM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you very much! Yes, you're right in noting that Kurt-**Tri-Hard** isn't following the original's formula. It might be fair to say that his fused personality (the combination of 'Nick', Kurt and Ernst's experience) is still very much Kurt at its core. He's a little more focused and driven, but he has his own ambitions. There are three **Tri-Hards** in this arc and Kurt has embraced the villainous ideal of what **Tri-Hard** should be, he just doesn't have the tools to match **H-3**,... _yet,.._ As for Nick, we'll have to see how these breakthroughs in his rehabilitation affect him,...

1/18/25, 7:36 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) You are very welcome. Your provide a rich story and even varied story that few on this site can match. I do really like this progression of Tri-Hard's development. Might even make me want to start rooting for him. As for Nick, I've been reading the other comments. He is divisive. As for my two cents, I haven't believed a reliable 'rehabilitation' is possible. Too much precedent in what others have gone through to make him the exception to the rule. And now with this chapter, even if he gets 'cured', he can never go back. And he likely wouldn't want to. Not after embracing himself like this. He needs Kurt. And Henry just isn't going to cut it. But I bet you may prove me wrong.
1/18/25, 7:20 PM
There is no back story as to why he is doing all this this to him. Is it because he is everything he wanted to be? Nice body and all? I just don’t get this at all.

1/18/25, 7:34 PM
@[SacGuy](/user/show/10054871) We don't always know what deep and twisted desires and thoughts lay under the surface of those we consider closest to us. Sometimes they themselves don't realize they have such fantasies or desires until something brings it to the forefront of their mind. Yes, they we're best friends, or at least that's what Tyler believed, and he is the one telling the story. The thing is, he's been oblivious to the crush that Zander has had on him all these years. Now with some special technology that gives Zander power he is able to make his deepest and darkest fantasies real. Power corrupts, and when lust is involved it can Cloud ones mind and make them forget that the person they are using is a person. I hope that helps answer your question, also there will be six chapters when this is finished and the ending might help answer this question as well.