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11/8/20, 12:50 PM
I would argue that *A Song of Ice and Fire* and *Game of Thrones* don't so much flip the script of fantasy as they apply real-world logic to the fantasy genre, even if it is in contradiction to the conventions of fantasy: the noble and honorable protagonist always makes it out alive, that kind of thing. Martin looked at fantasy and said, "No, telling someone whom you already suspect of murder that you know their terrible secret and try to offer them an out is a terrible idea, you'll wind up dead." And the same could be said *Pollination: The Series* and how it handles mind control erotica: yes, the Sheriff and Snake are strong-willed men, but their plan to create and control a being whose sole purpose is to control and guide men like themselves was probably always going to be doomed to failure. Resisting Bowden's psychic siren song from hundreds of miles away with the help of some subs is one thing, but trying to resist the Deputy's power at point-blank range was laughable. Sure, I had hoped that the Deputy wouldn't be the same as Bowden (and he isn't, in a couple important regards), but I realize now that I thought the Deputy would be in control and not bent on repopulation because that's what I *wanted* to happen. But reality is often harsher than fantasy, as Sheriff and Snake have demonstrated...
11/8/20, 12:42 PM
Thank you! I wanted to give the appearance that I was setting up a little band of rebels to heroically fight the Kansas Great One -- or romantically, to escape unscathed. @hynothrill kind of half called me out on it a few chapters ago. And I was like, heeheehee, wait till I spring my trap! I confess, it was harder to let the Sheriff go than I thought. But once I began writing the scene -- and it was one I'd seen in my head for many years -- it went down rather quickly. I tweaked the dialogue about a million times, true, but in my head, I did liken it to Ned Stark. But the good news is the Sheriff still has his head (tho maybe nothing in it) and there's LOTS of potential in the New Great One. Villain Upgrade is what comics are all about!
11/8/20, 12:01 PM
Greatly enjoyed this chapter. It's clever for the author to continually upend the seemingly established rules. That makes the writing all the more hot, as the reader endures mind fuck after mind fuck. Case in point are the Sheriff and Snake; both seemingly had control over their symbiots and were going to make it out unscathed, but then... not so fast. It really reminds me of GOT's execution of Ned Stark, or Dorne's Prince Oberyn's death by combat. Totally unexpected, hugely consequential, and engrossing for readers used to formulatic plots. I applaud you.
Anonymous
11/8/20, 11:49 AM
i love this story so much
11/8/20, 11:47 AM
So glad to see you post this on here and still looking forward to what comes next!
11/8/20, 11:39 AM
Interesante premisa, y parece que nuestro protagonista tiene que aprender a ser más cuidadoso
Philz
11/8/20, 11:31 AM
Absaloutly love this, would love to see more
11/8/20, 11:29 AM
Vance = scent Vinnie = touch Vernon = implant, however, Vernon has displayed weak scent and touch powers, too (as he did in this vignette w Rugby Boy). Although there's no evidence to support this, his cum may have a different effect orally versus anally. I consider Vance the most powerful of the three -- but not the sharpest tool in the shed. After chap19, I'll be free to discuss this less cryptically.
Anonymous
11/8/20, 9:53 AM
Its a Good story Plot, really interested to see where this goes....
11/8/20, 9:07 AM
loved the transformation of matt! would love to see you explore is preppy transformation a bit more!