Recent Comments

11/7/20, 11:26 PM
What? An unexpected ending? XD I don't like doing expected things. Glad you enjoyed the ending that did happen.
11/7/20, 11:09 PM
Very nice, and great writing.
11/7/20, 11:05 PM
> I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it’s going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot. > Hahaha. That was just me being cheeky. Everyone's been clamoring for the New Great One's reveal, and I didn't want to give any hints away about what would happen.
11/7/20, 10:53 PM
Snake's fate sealed with a blown kiss. Great paradox. Sorry to see him lose Rugby boy to a Scenter, but they are both still in love so all is well. I really enjoyed watching the two dominant men go down, and all from their own cum. Also glad to see Tully finally seeing the fate of Murdock as a mindless "drone." I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it's going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot.
Martin
11/7/20, 10:44 PM
First of all, an author always puts a huge amount of his energy, soul and fantasy into a story. So even if you don't like it, you should be kind to it and its author. Having said that, this story didn't get any actual harsh comments. M. Greene just pointed out that you've tagged the story incorrectly with 2nd story while it's first person. You've written a lot of stories on GSS, and as far as I can see, most of them have been received quite positively, it also seems that you do have some some fans here. So I don't get your reaction. That this story did get so few comments might be caused by its length. Most people come here to fap, and a story with 16000 words usually turns people away (it did me), so I'd recommend splitting it up into several chapter and keeping us wankers happy with each chapter :) This website is about fun and kink, nothing more. No point in getting agitated about what's written here! Martin (site owner)
El observador
11/7/20, 10:38 PM
Gracias por el apoyo, no tengo demasiada experiencia en esto por lo que como ya puedes notar tengo problemas con la otrografica. Espero por medio de la parctica mejorar y corregir esos problemas.
11/7/20, 9:57 PM
Excellent Hot and Original
11/7/20, 9:38 PM
One of your best stories. I keep coming back to it. It's just so good
11/7/20, 9:15 PM
Well, after reading the comments from the past few of my publications, I have decided to make this story,Danny meets Greg my last, period! i am not an English major or a fiction writer. i just thought i would take a stab at it; yet my affords were in error. Fictional writing is not my forte. Oh, those of you who have not written, but have thought about it, a word of advice, DON'T! The somewhat harsh criticism, unconstructive, is not worth it. It is easy ti criticize. Also, i am going to be remove myself from this website, too! Good bye!
11/7/20, 8:48 PM
Nicely done tale. Thanks for posting it.