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Bottom_Swimmer
1/19/25, 12:06 AM
Very good read, very hot too! Great work.
1/19/25, 12:01 AM
This is an amazing set up. I cannot wait for more!
BlueCollarChubFantasies
1/18/25, 10:31 PM
Would love to spend a bit of time in Jim's shoes. Lucky gooner
1/18/25, 9:23 PM
Nice, love it!
1/18/25, 9:03 PM
I like this, the slow build up makes me want to keep on reading! Can't wait for the second part!
1/18/25, 1:17 AM
I loved it! I'm so glad Colt finally managed to save Rocky. Well, Leviathan is still in the picture and it seems he still has a weak connection with Rocky and still has three heroes under his control, so it's not a definitive victory yet. I really want to know how extensive the changes caused by the fusion between Black Eagle and the real Rocky are. From what we've seen, the programs that Leviathan put in Rocky's mind so he would see him as his Master continue, but the fusion made it so that instead of Leviathan, Colt is Rocky's Master. But I wonder how the fusion affected Rocky's personality. And once again the mystery of the connection between Leviathan and Colt. What does Leviathan really want with my poor boy? Wasn't killing his parents enough? I really want to know what the root of Leviathan's obsession with Colt is. Does he just want to torment an old victim for fun? Does he just see Colt as a nuisance? Maybe he himself desires Colt in some twisted way and wants to make sure he has nothing left in life before he can claim him? One thing is for sure, there is a history between Leviathan and Colt beyond the murder of Colt's parents, and I really want to know what that history is. I'm also really hoping that when Leviathan is defeated once and for all (if he is defeated, of course), Volocity Wing, Voltedge, and Iron Claw can have their minds restored if they haven't already been broken beyond recovery. It would be kind of sad if in the end they end up forgotten or doomed to stay in a vegetative state like Iron Claw was after being defeated by Rocky in the first chapter.

1/18/25, 8:57 PM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) Thanks for your support.
1/18/25, 8:56 PM
I LOVE the slow build up. It’s going to make the payoff that much better. Great work!
1/18/25, 3:43 AM
I loved the change. Here I leave you my theory and an idea in case you want to take it into account. (I put references about the LGBT-themed book: The Extraordinaries). Theory 1. Leviathan somehow had some kind of close relationship with Colt's family, since there is no way that Leviathan would know Colt's name and want to kidnap him.... So Colt somehow has some kind of superpower and it was of a higher level than normal to be able to control it and so his parents blocked or suppressed it and maybe that's why Leviathan killed Colt's parents. Theory 2. Why does Leviathan want Colt to be unstable? Movies, series and comics have shown us that if someone who has superpowers is unstable in some way, their power can manifest in a more dangerous and uncontrolled way. Here I leave the idea in case you want to take it into account: In the book that I take as a reference, the protagonist (who "has no powers") was helping his superhero boyfriend to defeat a villain, but the villain makes him fall from a tall building and somehow that makes the protagonist's brain, seeing the danger of death, forced him to release his repressed powers and this causes the debris that fell along with the protagonist, to levitate with him, which makes you understand that he has a telekinesis superior to normal thanks to his mother and maternal grandfather (who were heroes in their time). Here you can put a similar situation with Colt in the next part (if you wish).

1/18/25, 8:54 PM
@[Belfertan88](/user/show/10011380) It is clear there is SOMETHING between those two.
1/18/25, 3:05 PM
I'm looking forward to much more in this saga.

1/18/25, 8:54 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Thanks!