> I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it’s going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot. > Hahaha. That was just me being cheeky. Everyone's been clamoring for the New Great One's reveal, and I didn't want to give any hints away about what would happen.

Snake's fate sealed with a blown kiss. Great paradox. Sorry to see him lose Rugby boy to a Scenter, but they are both still in love so all is well. I really enjoyed watching the two dominant men go down, and all from their own cum. Also glad to see Tully finally seeing the fate of Murdock as a mindless "drone." I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it's going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot.

First of all, an author always puts a huge amount of his energy, soul and fantasy into a story. So even if you don't like it, you should be kind to it and its author. Having said that, this story didn't get any actual harsh comments. M. Greene just pointed out that you've tagged the story incorrectly with 2nd story while it's first person. You've written a lot of stories on GSS, and as far as I can see, most of them have been received quite positively, it also seems that you do have some some fans here. So I don't get your reaction. That this story did get so few comments might be caused by its length. Most people come here to fap, and a story with 16000 words usually turns people away (it did me), so I'd recommend splitting it up into several chapter and keeping us wankers happy with each chapter :) This website is about fun and kink, nothing more. No point in getting agitated about what's written here! Martin (site owner)

Gracias por el apoyo, no tengo demasiada experiencia en esto por lo que como ya puedes notar tengo problemas con la otrografica. Espero por medio de la parctica mejorar y corregir esos problemas.

Excellent Hot and Original

One of your best stories. I keep coming back to it. It's just so good

Well, after reading the comments from the past few of my publications, I have decided to make this story,Danny meets Greg my last, period! i am not an English major or a fiction writer. i just thought i would take a stab at it; yet my affords were in error. Fictional writing is not my forte. Oh, those of you who have not written, but have thought about it, a word of advice, DON'T! The somewhat harsh criticism, unconstructive, is not worth it. It is easy ti criticize. Also, i am going to be remove myself from this website, too! Good bye!

Nicely done tale. Thanks for posting it.

It's a bit of a selective kink, but I've always liked seeing big, well-endowed, muscular and hairy men (Stereotypical virile alpha types, basically.), turned into dumb, submissive fuck-beasts, always horny, and ready to breed or be bred. If I was to get even more specific, I like when those men are sweaty and musky, and have a muscle-gut or beer-gut, while muscular everywhere else. So suffice to say, reading this story hit all my buttons, especially since both of the "animals" in the story were my type. The parts where they describe the barkeep's outfit (Nice reference to Aladdin's monkey by the way.), along with his ape-like behaviour, and degeneration from a person with a seemingly paternalistic personality, to a dumb, horny gorilla-like one, was extremely hot; Just imagining a jovial daddy-type bar-keeper/innkeeper, turned into an obedient, big-dicked chimp, just did it for me. And Sygg was a perfect addition, not only as a sexual counterpart to Brallin in the story, but as a character overall. He was a stoic, no-nonsense guy, a experience mercenary sell-sword who wasn't fighting bandits out of some noble purpose, but for money. But he was also cautious and experienced enough to know how dangerous seemingly innocent people can be, and was on guard. But even as he was being slowly worn-down, he didn't lose his sarcastic attitude. Overall, I really enjoyed this story, as it hit all my kinks (The whole covered in sweat and musk, along with the rimming.), some of which I didn't even know I had (Who knew I had a thing for muscle-bear daddies brainwashed into believing they were horny monkey's?). One of my favorite parts was when the bandit leader ordered Brallin to "grind your organ for me. Show me how a proper ape dances.", and mafe Brallin jerk himself off as his butt was eaten out by Sygg, while marching/dancing in place. The blend of comedy and debasement apparent in the situation was really something else. I really look forward to seeing if the story will get continued, with Sygg and Brallin, or "Ass" and "Chimp", put into more dirty and twisted situations. I also hope Tom writes a prequel for the story, depicting the brainwashing of Brallin, since it would be especially hot to see the bard Edric making him into a horny "Chimp".

Although spanking isn't one of my fetishes, I loved the romance between Lock and Sawyer and enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks for writing.