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11/7/20, 3:52 AM
What a terrific chapter. Honestly, I never liked Sheriff Lane--even all the way back in the first part of the series, he was an arrogant, cocky jerk. Seeing him get his just deserts is indeed delicious! :p Less tasty for me, though--and definitely playing into the horror element, which you do beautifully--are the scenes where the more powerful Symbionts use their abilities to make their victims fall utterly, hopelessly in love with them. That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific.* Imagine loving someone all your life, swearing up and down that you were meant to be...and with a single gesture, all of that love is destroyed. That makes me shiver and even cry a bit...you truly are an amazing author! :)
11/7/20, 2:17 AM
Great story. Now how about a follow up where the Minstrel follows the bandits back to their camp, double-crosses them, and enslaves /everybody/. Also (just a personal preferences), some scenes where the enslaved men are aware of their humiliation but unable to do anything about it would be nice. :
11/7/20, 12:56 AM
Beyond that, yeah, this is a super sexy story. Super sexy. I like all three men and hope that at the end of this little adventure there is a foursome with Jese and the three. hehe By the way the idea of him sitting on say a lap in a darkened performance center as the show goes on is now in my head, and its wonderful. Its an idea just as great as him laying on his belly, sucking a man's cock, as the man fingers and then maybe rims his ass while working to make it so others don't see them. (The game can make it so its impossible for them to be caught while putting on moments that make it seem like they will be caught.)
11/7/20, 12:43 AM
Good premise and excellent writing. The transformation was visceral and still pretty hot. These are quickly becoming my favorite series.
11/7/20, 12:36 AM
Im sorry but the presence of Christine ruined things. If she wasn't here it would have been great.
11/6/20, 11:09 PM
Well played, sir, well played!! A very enjoyable story; I enjoyed the surprise of Sygg to learn that the bard hadn't been vetted. That set the stage for everything to come.
Lusty Stallion
11/6/20, 10:59 PM
Well I didnt see Koby becoming a bottom or the demons explanation coming. Thanks man for a great story
11/6/20, 7:55 PM
I wish him luck in resolving his issues and hope he is able to join us soon!
11/6/20, 6:59 PM
Very hot and original story! Though I thought till the end that the bard would turn against the bandits and play some more. Hope the story continues! The few paragraphs describing Sygg's induction were especially well-written, hope there's more like that if you give this a follow-up!
11/6/20, 6:47 PM
What a sweet romance! I look forward to the next chapter.