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11/7/20, 12:56 AM
Beyond that, yeah, this is a super sexy story. Super sexy. I like all three men and hope that at the end of this little adventure there is a foursome with Jese and the three. hehe By the way the idea of him sitting on say a lap in a darkened performance center as the show goes on is now in my head, and its wonderful. Its an idea just as great as him laying on his belly, sucking a man's cock, as the man fingers and then maybe rims his ass while working to make it so others don't see them. (The game can make it so its impossible for them to be caught while putting on moments that make it seem like they will be caught.)
11/7/20, 12:43 AM
Good premise and excellent writing. The transformation was visceral and still pretty hot. These are quickly becoming my favorite series.
11/7/20, 12:36 AM
Im sorry but the presence of Christine ruined things. If she wasn't here it would have been great.
11/6/20, 11:09 PM
Well played, sir, well played!! A very enjoyable story; I enjoyed the surprise of Sygg to learn that the bard hadn't been vetted. That set the stage for everything to come.
Lusty Stallion
11/6/20, 10:59 PM
Well I didnt see Koby becoming a bottom or the demons explanation coming. Thanks man for a great story
11/6/20, 7:55 PM
I wish him luck in resolving his issues and hope he is able to join us soon!
11/6/20, 6:59 PM
Very hot and original story! Though I thought till the end that the bard would turn against the bandits and play some more. Hope the story continues! The few paragraphs describing Sygg's induction were especially well-written, hope there's more like that if you give this a follow-up!
11/6/20, 6:47 PM
What a sweet romance! I look forward to the next chapter.
11/6/20, 6:31 PM
> I’m a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better! > Funny you should mention Rubbrsome! I'm happy to say I got an email from him this morning, because he'd heard we were talking about him in the Forum. He's healthy and well, though he's dealing with some life stuff, and he'll come back to us when he can. I'm even happier to say he's reading this series -- and he likes it!
11/6/20, 6:20 PM
> Believe me when I say the next three chapters are a roller-coaster ride and none of it – I hope – what you expect. Personally, I'm satisfied that I managed to guess the big twists regarding the Deputy, Lane and Snake, and Rugby Boy based on your foreshadowing and some very generous hints from you. I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop with my theory about Rugby Boy, but I'm confident that will play out at least mostly as predicted- though of course, I welcome an unforeseen twist. Balancing the twin needs to satisfy an audience by meeting their expectations to create enjoyment and satisfaction while also subverting their expectations to create interest and emotional investment is difficult, even for people who tell stories for a living. > Everything we know and have been comfortable with has been thrown for a loop and we’re off in a different direction than we’d been set up for. I'm a Rubbrsome fan, Absman. The more twisted and trippy, the better!