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11/7/20, 11:15 AM
> It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds... would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. > That particular episode is ingrained in my head -- it was the first time I realized mind-control got my little tween penis hard. Or maybe it was Burt Ward's acting skills.
11/7/20, 9:55 AM
Love your story. We NEED the next chapters. please ❤️
11/7/20, 8:35 AM
@Feed Your Head, I found those scenes more amusing (and arousing) than horrific. It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds or (more appropriately) Poison Ivy would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. Maybe I'm just not a romantic, but that's been the hottest part of the story for me so far, watching these love relationships (or father-son relationships) diminish in importance as one of the men gets controlled by a Great One.
Guy
11/7/20, 7:53 AM
Would be hot if Jesse had some action with Colin as well in the game
El observador
11/7/20, 7:42 AM
your way to write the relationship between father and son I love it, continue with this please. option three interests me
Anonymous
11/7/20, 4:29 AM
Good story but I would like you to continuous "Big Topped" story most.
11/7/20, 3:52 AM
What a terrific chapter. Honestly, I never liked Sheriff Lane--even all the way back in the first part of the series, he was an arrogant, cocky jerk. Seeing him get his just deserts is indeed delicious! :p Less tasty for me, though--and definitely playing into the horror element, which you do beautifully--are the scenes where the more powerful Symbionts use their abilities to make their victims fall utterly, hopelessly in love with them. That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific.* Imagine loving someone all your life, swearing up and down that you were meant to be...and with a single gesture, all of that love is destroyed. That makes me shiver and even cry a bit...you truly are an amazing author! :)
11/7/20, 2:17 AM
Great story. Now how about a follow up where the Minstrel follows the bandits back to their camp, double-crosses them, and enslaves /everybody/. Also (just a personal preferences), some scenes where the enslaved men are aware of their humiliation but unable to do anything about it would be nice. :
11/7/20, 12:56 AM
Beyond that, yeah, this is a super sexy story. Super sexy. I like all three men and hope that at the end of this little adventure there is a foursome with Jese and the three. hehe By the way the idea of him sitting on say a lap in a darkened performance center as the show goes on is now in my head, and its wonderful. Its an idea just as great as him laying on his belly, sucking a man's cock, as the man fingers and then maybe rims his ass while working to make it so others don't see them. (The game can make it so its impossible for them to be caught while putting on moments that make it seem like they will be caught.)
11/7/20, 12:43 AM
Good premise and excellent writing. The transformation was visceral and still pretty hot. These are quickly becoming my favorite series.