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11/7/20, 12:46 PM
what part is the series is unitended wish: a boost of confidence from? (if not ur story than who?)
Anonymous
11/7/20, 12:28 PM
I like the High Fantasy Gone Wrong thing you've got going on. This is like a pie in the face for all those grand adventurers, their careers ended in utter embarrassment. Great!
Anonymous
11/7/20, 12:22 PM
So hot! Please continue it
Anonymous
11/7/20, 12:14 PM
This was so good!!! Please make one with the dad!
11/7/20, 11:20 AM
> That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific*. > 100% agreed! That's why I went there rather than mind-wiped slavehood. This allows the Hosts to retain their personalities -- rather than just be drones -- but have motivation to obey, however severely misguided it may be.
11/7/20, 11:15 AM
> It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds... would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. > That particular episode is ingrained in my head -- it was the first time I realized mind-control got my little tween penis hard. Or maybe it was Burt Ward's acting skills.
11/7/20, 9:55 AM
Love your story. We NEED the next chapters. please ❤️
11/7/20, 8:35 AM
@Feed Your Head, I found those scenes more amusing (and arousing) than horrific. It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds or (more appropriately) Poison Ivy would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. Maybe I'm just not a romantic, but that's been the hottest part of the story for me so far, watching these love relationships (or father-son relationships) diminish in importance as one of the men gets controlled by a Great One.
Guy
11/7/20, 7:53 AM
Would be hot if Jesse had some action with Colin as well in the game
El observador
11/7/20, 7:42 AM
your way to write the relationship between father and son I love it, continue with this please. option three interests me