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11/6/20, 2:15 PM
Yes! YES! To quote a certain cinematic evil overlord, "Everything is proceeding as I have foreseen." The Deputy is still the Deputy, but the bonding with the Great One still clearly overshadows that. He is in command, and he won't brook rebellion or disobedience. Bowden now comes off as a knock-off, the Deputy is much hotter. His subjugation of Lane was such delicious payback. It remains to be seen if he will be erased like Murdock was, or if he will retain his identity, albeit in unyielding subservience to the Deputy. Personally, I think it would be better if Lane was still aware, but beholden to the being he tried to dominate. The scene with Snake is what really got me hard. The sudden flip from trepidation and confrontation to love and adoration was so hot. And the echo of the sudden willingness to die for the Deputy, and the cry of "HAIL GREAT ONE!"... amazing. What a fool I was to think the Deputy would be a savior. A very satisfied fool. And yep, Vernon has his hooks into Rugby Boy now. Fingers crossed that we'll get to see the implantation play out. A nice touch of the soldiers coming to support the Deputy, that could be a fun little fight scene. And I'm fully predicting that the Deputy will transfer Rugby Boy's loyalty and adoration for Vernon to Snake, as a little bonus cherry on top for "fathering" him.
11/6/20, 8:18 AM
wow !! AMEIZING !! continue pleas!!
Anonymous
11/6/20, 5:41 AM
im all for more ftm tf!! great stuff, dont see that at all!
11/6/20, 4:43 AM
I'm very intrigued for this story and I'm dying for read the next part. I think its quite good and very hot. Brad sounds very hot, his accent is sexy. But as hot as this story is, it seem very unfair for me, since Stuart didn't acted the way he did for cruelty, he just wanted more time with his boyfriend, and he really seemed to honestly like him the way he was. I'm really hoping Brad get more (and I mean FAR MORE) of than he bargained for, if Stuart's transformation goes out of control.
11/6/20, 4:43 AM
Damn
11/6/20, 4:25 AM
Hi! I was just wondering when the next chapter would be coming out 🙂
11/6/20, 1:05 AM
can he try and possess his body back? or show afterlife from his prospective.
EntrancedGay92
11/6/20, 12:51 AM
Another fantastic, soon to be incest, hypnosis story! Looking forward to the next few chapters.
11/6/20, 12:33 AM
The Tyler-Prof confrontation scene was very well done. It set up the take down of Tyler beautifully. And the foreshading of what is to be using Mac was hot