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Anonymous
11/7/20, 12:22 PM
So hot! Please continue it
Anonymous
11/7/20, 12:14 PM
This was so good!!! Please make one with the dad!
11/7/20, 11:20 AM
> That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific*. > 100% agreed! That's why I went there rather than mind-wiped slavehood. This allows the Hosts to retain their personalities -- rather than just be drones -- but have motivation to obey, however severely misguided it may be.
11/7/20, 11:15 AM
> It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds... would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. > That particular episode is ingrained in my head -- it was the first time I realized mind-control got my little tween penis hard. Or maybe it was Burt Ward's acting skills.
11/7/20, 9:55 AM
Love your story. We NEED the next chapters. please ❤️
11/7/20, 8:35 AM
@Feed Your Head, I found those scenes more amusing (and arousing) than horrific. It reminded me of storylines from the old Batman series, where Marsha the Queen of Diamonds or (more appropriately) Poison Ivy would use a potion or pheromone perfume to make men fall in love with her. Maybe I'm just not a romantic, but that's been the hottest part of the story for me so far, watching these love relationships (or father-son relationships) diminish in importance as one of the men gets controlled by a Great One.
Guy
11/7/20, 7:53 AM
Would be hot if Jesse had some action with Colin as well in the game
El observador
11/7/20, 7:42 AM
your way to write the relationship between father and son I love it, continue with this please. option three interests me
Anonymous
11/7/20, 4:29 AM
Good story but I would like you to continuous "Big Topped" story most.
11/7/20, 3:52 AM
What a terrific chapter. Honestly, I never liked Sheriff Lane--even all the way back in the first part of the series, he was an arrogant, cocky jerk. Seeing him get his just deserts is indeed delicious! :p Less tasty for me, though--and definitely playing into the horror element, which you do beautifully--are the scenes where the more powerful Symbionts use their abilities to make their victims fall utterly, hopelessly in love with them. That complete erasure of personhood and the destruction of genuine emotional connection (be it between parents and children or true lovers) like it is nothing is *horrific.* Imagine loving someone all your life, swearing up and down that you were meant to be...and with a single gesture, all of that love is destroyed. That makes me shiver and even cry a bit...you truly are an amazing author! :)