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11/6/20, 5:03 PM
Back on Oct 13, on the Forum Discussion Thread, I wrote: > So… I just wrote a scene in chapter 18 that’s been marinating in my head for over fifteen years! Some of this story has just stored itself away as a series of images – I “saw” this or that happening, I just hadn’t worked out the details.Then there are those scenes – like the one I just finished – that I knew everything about! I knew the dialogue and the camera angles and the images I wanted. It’s almost surrealistic that I’m actually writing it. > I've been sitting on this chapter for weeks now, dying for you to all get here. I'm still not completely free to talk about EVERYTHING, but I will say that I've worked VERY HARD to get everybody hoping for a happy ending in a story where we're rooting for the villains. Just think, this is 9 (of 12), and we're STILL building toward a denouement. That's something that POLLINATION: The Series, Book One, has NEVER been able to say!
11/6/20, 4:42 PM
Rereading the chapter (and blowing another load over the description of Lane and Snake's enthrallment, that was Grade A writing), the terror and hopelessness of Tully at the sight of the enhanced/erased Murdock sticks out as a haunting image, a narrative warning that there's not going to be a clean, simple, happy ending, at least for Part 2. Whether it be humanity or the symbionts and their Hosts, someone is screwed. I remember you mentioning that you kept Tully around because of a particular tableau that you wanted to use her in. I have a feeling this is it.
11/6/20, 4:03 PM
Nice one, good plot ! Thanks for this story !
CMC
11/6/20, 3:21 PM
These aren't my fetishes but the story is extremely clever and fun.
11/6/20, 2:32 PM
This is great! I love how the various plot threads in the story are coming together so quickly at this point. I guess good things really do come to those who wait.
Anonymous
11/6/20, 2:27 PM
Great story. Any chance of knowing how Vato continued his domination of the two white guys, and how he permanently turned Danilo into the dumb bottom in their relationship.
11/6/20, 2:15 PM
Yes! YES! To quote a certain cinematic evil overlord, "Everything is proceeding as I have foreseen." The Deputy is still the Deputy, but the bonding with the Great One still clearly overshadows that. He is in command, and he won't brook rebellion or disobedience. Bowden now comes off as a knock-off, the Deputy is much hotter. His subjugation of Lane was such delicious payback. It remains to be seen if he will be erased like Murdock was, or if he will retain his identity, albeit in unyielding subservience to the Deputy. Personally, I think it would be better if Lane was still aware, but beholden to the being he tried to dominate. The scene with Snake is what really got me hard. The sudden flip from trepidation and confrontation to love and adoration was so hot. And the echo of the sudden willingness to die for the Deputy, and the cry of "HAIL GREAT ONE!"... amazing. What a fool I was to think the Deputy would be a savior. A very satisfied fool. And yep, Vernon has his hooks into Rugby Boy now. Fingers crossed that we'll get to see the implantation play out. A nice touch of the soldiers coming to support the Deputy, that could be a fun little fight scene. And I'm fully predicting that the Deputy will transfer Rugby Boy's loyalty and adoration for Vernon to Snake, as a little bonus cherry on top for "fathering" him.
11/6/20, 8:18 AM
wow !! AMEIZING !! continue pleas!!
Anonymous
11/6/20, 5:41 AM
im all for more ftm tf!! great stuff, dont see that at all!
11/6/20, 4:43 AM
I'm very intrigued for this story and I'm dying for read the next part. I think its quite good and very hot. Brad sounds very hot, his accent is sexy. But as hot as this story is, it seem very unfair for me, since Stuart didn't acted the way he did for cruelty, he just wanted more time with his boyfriend, and he really seemed to honestly like him the way he was. I'm really hoping Brad get more (and I mean FAR MORE) of than he bargained for, if Stuart's transformation goes out of control.