Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/5/20, 1:36 PM
Your writing style is absolutely incredible. You create such amazing visuals with your words!
11/5/20, 11:35 AM
The story is okay, but it isn't in the 2nd person - it's in the first person to begin with ['I'] and then switches to the third person ['he, she. it']. Second person is 'you' - example: You walk slowly towards me.
boi98229
11/5/20, 6:59 AM
i wrote a long comment and lost it!!! Suffice it to say for now that I love this story and am looking forward to reading more of this story and more from this author. Thanks for you great imagination, writing ability, and willingness to share it with the rest of us.
boi98229
11/5/20, 6:11 AM
OMG! After reading this chapter, i have such a hard on, and want to do exactly like Richard and the all the other stupid boys who asked to experience total mind control... and now more than ever a rubber gimp suit as well. i've always thought wanting to be a gimp was completely crazy, and i still think so. Yet more than ever i would love to at least experience that level of mind control! Coming back to my comments on how the *process* of seduction, induction and loss of control makes a story more arousing for me. Yeah, that! i still think so, but that said your story is still so so hot. i surrender to your imagination! Please just continue to take me wherever you like. You are the Master Storyteller. Please just write more! And thanks so much for your imagination, writing ability, and willingness to share it. ~david
Anonymous
11/5/20, 5:47 AM
I live to serve the virus
boi98229
11/5/20, 4:44 AM
Just read this chapter again. Still found it very hot, and relate really closely to both characters. That said, i understand Nocturne's comment, and agree that with that additional detail this chapter could have been even more arousing. While as i had said, i like more detail about the techniques for induction, but perhaps what is even more exciting is the slow process of seduction and control. Again as Nocturne suggested (i still haven't read the second chapter), you can still (and now have hopefully) included more back and forth in this psychological duel in the next chapter. The other really important element for me is character development. By including more detail about Richard up front we would have been more committed to him during the seduction, and more in touch with his psyche as he realized his predicament. All that said, i am truly loving this story! It relates so closely with my own strong fetish for hypnosis, mind control, and surrender to a stronger Man. Without further ado, i am moving with great excitement onto the next chapter!! Thanks so much for this one!!
Anonymous
11/5/20, 3:59 AM
excellent
11/5/20, 3:57 AM
I hate the fact that I'm jealous of these people.
11/5/20, 3:47 AM
Damn that was hot. You did it again.