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EntrancedGay92
11/6/20, 12:51 AM
Another fantastic, soon to be incest, hypnosis story! Looking forward to the next few chapters.
11/6/20, 12:33 AM
The Tyler-Prof confrontation scene was very well done. It set up the take down of Tyler beautifully. And the foreshading of what is to be using Mac was hot
11/5/20, 7:32 PM
Greg Sanders, like, from CSI?
Mesmerdude
11/5/20, 7:21 PM
This was really good, extremely hot concept, fun execution, although feels it cut off right as it was building up. Would absolutely love to read more!
Reb
11/5/20, 6:36 PM
Great story, good detail, hot subject, very well written. Read it all in one go, edging all the time. Look forward to more. (The author is also hot!)
11/5/20, 4:04 PM
Wow. This chapter was fantastic! Thank you for the content warning, too--it was not just a good way to steel myself against it, but a reminder of the kind of events in these stories and how scary they can be. It looks like my mystery answer was wrong, though...although I see another "And Then There Were None" parallel. "One choked his little self and then there were nine ('Gagged,' oral sex); one overslept himself and then there were eight ('Slumbered,' fell asleep and got transformed)." If we're going in order, then we have: "One got left behind," "One chopped himself in halves," "A bumblebee stung one," "One got in Chancery," "A red herring swallowed one," "A big bear hugged one," "One got all frizzled up," "He went and hanged himself..." I wonder how the transformations will happen! You're an amazing author. :)
11/5/20, 3:28 PM
Otra historia en español!!!!! ahhhhh!!!! >.< sigue escribiendo, me encanta ver mas autores en español :3 solo te diria como consejo que le des otra revisada al texto, habia algunls errores de dedo en varias partes, pero en general todo muy bien ^ ^ me dejaste con la.idea de q iria contra el dueño XD pero supongo q tiene sentido que primero vaya por lo quebesta a su alcance 😅 ya quiero leer mas y ver si el efecto fue permanente o no... o como reaccionara si el efecto se va... digo creo q nunca le dijo que estuviera desacuerdo o que lw gustara lo que ocurrio entre ellos XD esperare ansiosamente la.siguiente parte :3
Anonymous
11/5/20, 1:36 PM
Your writing style is absolutely incredible. You create such amazing visuals with your words!
11/5/20, 11:35 AM
The story is okay, but it isn't in the 2nd person - it's in the first person to begin with ['I'] and then switches to the third person ['he, she. it']. Second person is 'you' - example: You walk slowly towards me.